Jay 3rd Feat Hard Target - Holdin On (Some deep Life Shit)
 

yea this was an open collab and i been thinken of makin a track similar to it so i was like yea i'll hop on this... Lyrics is on The SC page if anyone likes to read and listen....
Concept is Goin through ya struggles..Depression.. all the negative shit in ya life.. just gotta Hold on..
I got the Verses HT got The Hook

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5343565

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u make some bomb hooks man...they actually make me wanna sing along


beat is coo

flow is good

slick soundin track





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lol aint me makin the hook that boy Hard Target.. i just have good taste in what i hear haha.. thanks for the feed though... p'z

beat starts pretty nice..talkin in the background is kinda weird

verse comes in..your voice is somewhat corny sounding...lyrically its cool though. i like some of the things you say.

hook is cool..definitely works.

2nd verse comes in..one of the better tracks lyrically that ive heard..i like the whole story telling kinda deal. i like the emotion..


pretty cool song..keep it up man

Feeling it, im a big fan of hard target really love that guy, u did the track justice, def felt it. if i could ask what do u use to record like whats ur setup. if u could PM it if u dont wanna post it. good track.

thanx for the feed guys appreciate it..

york... i use a Samon C01U Studio Condencer Mic... Bought the Micshock mount for it (in my sig) and still waitin on my pop filter to arrive in the mail... record wit CEP 2.0.. i could have a hell of a lot better quality.. but my whole place is ALL TILE sucks.. echo's like a muh fucka.. but i still manage.. it decent enough to boom in ride naw mean...
and yea i kno Ryan Somewhat cuz i hit Tampa all the time.. he kno's who jay 3rd is... likes how i rep the southern Fla and he reps the northern Fla..

this was coo u have a unique voice i dunno no sure if i can vibe wit it......ur flow is coo and i liker how u deliver....annunciation is pretty coo.....hook is coo as well ......as a whole this song was decent i kinda liked it....keep doin ur shit homie =1=

yea some people feel different on my voice.. somethin unique though is how i see it.... but thanx for the feed man.. usually people dont really RTF.... appreciate it

Love the beat so far, verse starts off nicely, quality is not bad but atleas I can hear what you saying, Flow's hot I like it, Love tyhe hook, fucking good, second verse cool, nice emotions, overall pretty good man, been al ong time that I heard from you

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