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don cardyac 06-08-07 10:05 AM

feed me rappers or feed me beats keystyle
 
[chorus]
i'm a urban savage, out here in these streets/
so feed me rappers or feed me beats/
my ribs is showin', me and my fam gotta eat/
so feed me rappers or feed me beats/
spot a wack across the street & my stomach'll growl/
so feed me rappers or feed me beats/
& i battle him for his money in front of the crowd/
so feed me rappers or feed me./..................
.................................................. ...................

[verse 1]
... beat DOWNS, stick UPS, LEFT hooks, you know that i'm RIGHT/
got BARS and your WILL papers to fill out like they came wit' the BIKE/
i'll TY-SON and start BOXING 'em up, all its missing is MIKE/
take ur girl, TURN'ER and BEAT the P****, all i'm missin' is IKE/
get that!?, i'll hit that, big phat, wet twat, as i get checks/
GUPPIES in a SHARK pond, i got this game in a FISHNET/
speakin' of ya girl, i'l spit 'er game while i'm openin'er fishnet, stockins/
put it in her MOUTH like a DEN'IST but i'm her ROD-MAN/
y'all mise well box me wit'cha eyes closed cuz you aint seein' me wit' punches/
my knuckleprints'll leave dents in ur stomach, lookin' like u was doin crunches/
wearin' my chains the only time y'all get the hunches/
and thats only in ur back,i'll have police's dogs sniffin' u like crack/
just to see if u alive, if they find you/
wherever my g's had to decide, to hide you/
put the HEAT to you and have ya face SWELLIN' like the MUFFIN man/
put'chu in a BLENDER & have you on the GRIND like the BUMPIN DANCE/

:shoot: :shocked:


lmao!!! i just murked at anybody who got a problem wit' me. like i said in the other thread, i got "punches 4 dayz". see me!

don cardyac 06-08-07 11:14 AM

verse2 coming soon.

Ransum 06-08-07 01:11 PM

lol.... nice concept.... a bit different...
punches was aight.. some decent word-play... flow decent...
all around a nice read....

keep drop'em.....

don cardyac 06-08-07 01:33 PM

thanx for the feedback.


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