mav. vs don cardyac
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

verses due tommorrow 10am eastern time.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-11-07 at 01:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

don cardyac has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-07 01:14 PM.

wins you'll forever give, in this next line check his sig/
cuz if "the good die young" than i aint never lived/
what he PRESENTS aint my FUTURE so he's PAST to me/
and all he does is talk S*** thats why he's ASS to me/
i'm blew, cuz i actually read from from this lame rapper/
i'll give you more blues than the jerseys of the team u named after/
and if thats your STATUS than, yes/
call me a SICK PUPPY cuz i'm takin' SHOTS at this VET/
even tho it aint'cha status, check what the stats is in it/
i knew he was kinda suspect!, now he admits he got an undercover spirit/
and i'm one that he scared to play wit'/
cuz i'll take this mav out of contention like baron davis/

Mav. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-07 02:14 PM.

You roll with a dunce crew,think your Sonic,I got your trail
I sliced your Knucles,now you aint fly cuz I chopped your Tails
Nuff beef,Im a higher rank,your dirt to me,so the talks over
Cuz Mystic Layed you out like carpet
.............................so I have something to walk over
Fuck you queer,nobody wants you here,and you from DC
And your face is fuckin ugly
................so Id be unluckey if I get a chance to CD
Ill throw you up bitch,and you'll block my bullets that'll drill ya
And Ill make you take hits for me like Pain Killas
Ill fuck you up,your a yellow belly,you just aint waxy
While any rap site got you
.........your gettin banged in,like a hookers taxi!
your on the computer geek all day,and what does this amount
Don found himself lost in this world
.........................................Its unamiliar grounds

Fuck you...

bump this site is inactive............................

bump.............................................. .................... ..... :shoot:

Voted For: Mav.

Nuff beef,Im a higher rank,your dirt to me,so the talks over
Cuz Mystic Layed you out like carpet
.............................so I have something to walk over
Fuck you queer,nobody wants you here,and you from DC
And your face is fuckin ugly
................so Id be unluckey if I get a chance to CD

vs.

nothing.

Don, your verse was whack. No offense or anything..i know you don't suck but i was seeing a lack of effort. your attempts at punches were not strong or anything..everything was just sub. par.

Mav.-Your verse was pretty weak as well, you had 2 good bars that got you the win. wheather or not my name was mentioned the lines were still hard hitting and enought to beat your opponent.

v/mav.

thanks Myst....upp....................................... ............................................

looks kinda like don bit my line but worded it differnt....


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mav.
Your shit dude,and no self glory but really I am a vet...
People saying that Lays crazy,
............so I guess I gotta take better care of my pets...



http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=242708

Quote:
and if thats your STATUS than, yes/
call me a SICK PUPPY cuz i'm takin' SHOTS at this VET/



http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=3171147

i aint bite that line. i saw that ur sig said veteran status so i said that i'm taking shots at this vet.

well obviously anybody who actuallyreads what you just posted can tell that in no way am i biting or even wording that line differently. i was just using nameplay with ur sig.

Voted For: Mav.

Nuff beef,Im a higher rank,your dirt to me,so the talks over
Cuz Mystic Layed you out like carpet
.............................so I have something to walk over
Fuck you queer,nobody wants you here,and you from DC
And your face is fuckin ugly
................so Id be unluckey if I get a chance to CD

vs

i'm blew, cuz i actually read from from this lame rapper/
i'll give you more blues than the jerseys of the team u named after

v/ mav for bein more consistent

2-0................................................. ....

Voted For: Mav.

You roll with a dunce crew,think your Sonic,I got your trail
I sliced your Knucles,now you aint fly cuz I chopped your Tails
aight...
Nuff beef,Im a higher rank,your dirt to me,so the talks over
Cuz Mystic Layed you out like carpet
.............................so I have something to walk over
ha nice....
Fuck you queer,nobody wants you here,and you from DC
And your face is fuckin ugly
................so Id be unluckey if I get a chance to CD
decent word-play...
Ill throw you up bitch,and you'll block my bullets that'll drill ya
And Ill make you take hits for me like Pain Killas
ook...
Ill fuck you up,your a yellow belly,you just aint waxy
While any rap site got you
.........your gettin banged in,like a hookers taxi!
nah..
your on the computer geek all day,and what does this amount
Don found himself lost in this world
.........................................Its unamiliar grounds
eeeh but ook ending should of been better thou...
had a few decent punches an a bit of word-play nice verse...



wins you'll forever give, in this next line check his sig/
cuz if "the good die young" than i aint never lived/
hes sig just say N U R>>?? dont get the personal but ok line still...
what he PRESENTS aint my FUTURE so he's PAST to me/
and all he does is talk S*** thats why he's ASS to me/
oook..
i'm blew, cuz i actually read from from this lame rapper/
i'll give you more blues than the jerseys of the team u named after/
eeeh but ook...
and if thats your STATUS than, yes/
call me a SICK PUPPY cuz i'm takin' SHOTS at this VET/
aight..
even tho it aint'cha status, check what the stats is in it/
i knew he was kinda suspect!, now he admits he got an undercover spirit/
nah...
and i'm one that he scared to play wit'/
cuz i'll take this mav out of contention like baron davis/
aight ending.... i've seen harder from you but you was slack'in int his one...


i actully think mav. just edge this battle out...
he had the best punch in this battle that sttod out to me.. and hes word-play was aight... and a bit more consistent....
don i've seen better from you should of tooken your time insted of rushing it...

vote: mav.

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