The Wind
 

The Wind
so gracefull
the softness
of oxygeon
so still it sits
but a blow
for the sound of wind
a whistle
a deep breath
breathe the air
digest it into your body
the powers of the earth
combined to make oxygeon
the blow through my window
chilly and nippy it comes
refreshing your body
as you sit outside
and let the wind
enwrap itself around you
you deeply breathe in
the wind...

By Mav.

was okay, nothing special...imagery was iffy...there was some there man...just missed it by a little..i pictured leaves brustling in the wind..and felt like i was the wind...idk y..thats just wat was painted for me...it flowed nicely..and all that, im not a fan of the 2 word lines..but oh well lol...you followed the concept ok, nothing to creative or outstanding..but u followed the topic nonethe less