A New King
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3172852
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3172853

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5460812

your voice is kinda cool..levels dont sound too good.

try to balance it a little..beat is real hype..turn your vocals down a bit. flow in the chorus part is a little off.

verse is alright nothing special..sound like some freeway kinda stuff..nothing that really caught my ear..


dude the flow is weird man..it kinda actually works but then again at times it sounds WAY off..this is actually pretty cool something refreshing

get at me..we should collabo..

my AIM is Meehahaha

What's hot:

1 Intense beat
2 Intense sounding delivery
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What needs work:

1 flow is lackluster
2 more complex lyrics wudnt hurt here
3 hook sounded odd...were u rapping or just talking on the hook?

Overall:

needed some focus...up the basic elements dawg...flow/etc



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