love is a drug
 

love got my heart hurting
love got my eyes bursting
...with tears
cause i got love with fear
not tryin to love cause she might not always be here
but i got hope
cause im addicted to her like a pheen is addicted to dope

not as impressive as your other post in open mic ....i think it should of been longer ....i would have gotten more into it when reading it if it was longer ...the whole super short written thing just isn't cuttin it for me...unless its like a cypher verse lol....~1~ keep writing...

i guess it was the only thing u were feeling when u were writin dis?? lol
kinda wway too short but i felt it sumwaht. i know what u pmean, but u coulda made it wayy better but its all coo.
peace

Not to imprest but if u made it more it would be really tight but its a decent but not great lil shot story!

Borin to me it was WAY to short but i guess it was alright!

it should be longer..but its good