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sin-scere 07-26-07 04:25 PM

sin-scere vs Lil-E
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-29-07 at 04:25 PM

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System 07-26-07 04:26 PM

sin-scere has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-07 04:26 PM.

System 07-26-07 07:01 PM

Lil-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-07 07:01 PM.

Lil-E 07-26-07 07:07 PM

Yo,
My flow bites harder then u niggas wit slice/
Niggas like sin-scere like to cry all night bought dice/
hatin on niggas cuz he lose,
i dont talk to niggas like him i got juice/
next time u make a scene about ur own rap screen/
shut the fuck up cuz u got beat by clova a.k.a green,
like a four leaf nigga its time to beam ur new color is green when i hit u in ur spleen/
like green beans and peas, ur a mini me,
tech nines pop off, and u jus met a g/
im gunna take ur head and tear it to shreads/
like i do to ur whole hood lay them to bed/
hell yah thats wat i said cuz ur luck has ran out,
i laughed when u p.m.ed me callin me out,
shut ur mouth u text records south,
u would cum at a newbie shut ur mutha fuckin mouth,
i hope u came wit flames and i hope i lose,
so u can get ur pride bak, and learn how to juke/
u would think u would go after sumone on ur level,
jus cuz i sizzle niggas evryone no's im better/

sin-scere 07-27-07 12:45 PM

I kno everyone kno's besides mi
dat he just joinin da wagon callin himself Lil-E''
Obviously u cant defeat mi
2 elevate change ur name 2 ''Big-E''
u heard him he say his name iz Lil-E
I think we should call him ''Lil-Ecstasy''
Because thats all he's been n all he was
people listen 2 ur shyt 2 git a ''Lil-Buzz''
im riddin on ur name just because
i dont hav a answer y but i just like 2 judge
i think he done it cuz there's already a eazye n lileazyE
so he a lil more little so he tok of eazy n end up wit lil-e
but im a done diss chump like aids
diss aint fukin cheeker's but nigga checkmate
dont write nun bac 4 ur sake
cuz i took every last bit your pride wen i spit in ur face
a couple more bars will divour u
not even a couple u aint worthy so im a buss 1 or 2
we all kno wat he'll do,he say oh sin aint gone hurt mi cuz wi in da same crew
naw fuker dat aint tru
i aint a nazi but i'll extrminate u like a fukin jew
u suk many dik's but he'll say a few
onli time dis bitch spit sik is wen he caught dah flu

sin-scere 07-27-07 12:49 PM

good luck on dah votes.Bitch...........................

Clova 07-27-07 02:24 PM

This was feedback posted for Lil-E
 
Since there aint votes then i'll give it to u as my feedbak but the thing that was between me and sin is squashed so u dont gotta say that but it was a good flow and u deff. did ur research if i could vote o would have it!

MC Puff 07-27-07 02:32 PM

Voted For: Lil-E

I give my vote to Lil-E dude did his research and evrything good job and flow!

MC Spit 07-27-07 03:03 PM

Voted For: sin-scere

I'll give my vote to sin-scere he came wit alot of stuff all though LiL-E did his thing as far as resarch goes!

sin-scere 07-27-07 11:28 PM

haha i cant research him he's unknown lol haaah jks,he did a good job uppin 4 more votes

Ransum 07-28-07 04:59 PM

Voted For: sin-scere

Yo,
My flow bites harder then u niggas wit slice/
Niggas like sin-scere like to cry all night bought dice/
the 1st line makes no fucking sense... 2ed is weak...

hatin on niggas cuz he lose,
i dont talk to niggas like him i got juice/
^^ weak...
next time u make a scene about ur own rap screen/
shut the fuck up cuz u got beat by clova a.k.a green,
oook...but that personal is weak cuz clova is 4-0... it would of been a good personal IF CLOVA WAS 1-4.. see what im saying now?? gotta learn how to use personal cuz some of them can backfire like this one....

like a four leaf nigga its time to beam ur new color is green when i hit u in ur spleen/
makes no sense... weak...
like green beans and peas, ur a mini me,
tech nines pop off, and u jus met a g/
1st line make no sense, 2ed ok

im gunna take ur head and tear it to shreads/
like i do to ur whole hood lay them to bed/
best bar u have.. striaht to the point.. but get more creative...

hell yah thats wat i said cuz ur luck has ran out,
i laughed when u p.m.ed me callin me out,
eeeh
shut ur mouth u text records south,
u would cum at a newbie shut ur mutha fuckin mouth,
WEAK...

i hope u came wit flames and i hope i lose,
so u can get ur pride bak, and learn how to juke/
nah...
u would think u would go after sumone on ur level,
jus cuz i sizzle niggas evryone no's im better/
nah....

you need a lot of work still man....

all around 3 outta 10

I kno everyone kno's besides mi
dat he just joinin da wagon callin himself Lil-E''
eeh...

Obviously u cant defeat mi
2 elevate change ur name 2 ''Big-E''
nah.. not really hitting...

u heard him he say his name iz Lil-E
I think we should call him ''Lil-Ecstasy''
nah man... you need to word this bar out better it could of been decent...

Because thats all he's been n all he was
people listen 2 ur shyt 2 git a ''Lil-Buzz''
aight... straight to the point flow smooth..

im riddin on ur name just because
i dont hav a answer y but i just like 2 judge
WTF?? its a battle... this is a FILLER...

i think he done it cuz there's already a eazye n lileazyE
so he a lil more little so he tok of eazy n end up wit lil-e
you tryed some WORDPLAY.. which is cool keep trying those they help...

but im a done diss chump like aids
diss aint fukin cheeker's but nigga checkmate
WTF??

dont write nun bac 4 ur sake
cuz i took every last bit your pride wen i spit in ur face
aight... but still lacking effect on the hit..

a couple more bars will divour u
not even a couple u aint worthy so im a buss 1 or 2
aight...

we all kno wat he'll do,he say oh sin aint gone hurt mi cuz wi in da same crew
naw fuker dat aint tru
i aint a nazi but i'll extrminate u like a fukin jew
kinda streched but best bar in this battle...

u suk many dik's but he'll say a few
onli time dis bitch spit sik is wen he caught dah flu
ok ending....

all around... 5.5 outta 10

ya need to keep elevating man and stay focus with who you are dissing and how...

sin-scere 07-28-07 05:39 PM

tanx 4 dah feedbac yo lol. i was fukin off wen i was writin diss shyt lol n didnt try as hard. im a hav 2 com hard at al times i kno , tanx 4 dah feedbac

Grimmy 07-28-07 06:45 PM

Voted For: sin-scere

I dont think none of ur guyses stuff really hit or nuthin i like that u did ur thang and flowed alright so i'll give u my vote not really much of a battle though!

B.M. 07-28-07 06:52 PM

Voted For: Lil-E

Mane this battle was wack kinda! I dont got room to talk i havent battle yet but damn i jus give u my vote cuz ur shit was more personal on a diff. level!

MOB 07-28-07 06:55 PM

Voted For: Lil-E

This shit was wack you got my vote lil-E do ur thang and take wat i gave u!


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