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Quick Keystyle
vv I'm waiting for Jesus to appear. vv
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3178203 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3178204 I don't feel your shit// Look how real I get// I stay sick like all those Third World African kids// You can talk all you want about ki's, bread and infared// But you just look like a kid screamin "Anarachy!" and lightin a ciggerrette// I'll leave your body in No Where until they call a Who Dunnit// And 90% of rappers out make me a new-born, sick to the stomach// I'll place my flag on the tip-top of Hip-Hop Mountain's summit// And watch the rest of you try to reach it and plummet// You've tried to merk me in the past, but that didn't work// You just turned all my dickriders into little young turks// RV kinda reminds me of Kevin Smith in Clerks// Barley any of us left// and we swear we're of the highest intellect. bleh........... Quote:
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Very good. Great rhyme scheme, just one quick question:
what are the //'s for? |
^^^^^ (/) That Is USed TA Show Where The Line Ends
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Nice Drop, Could Vocab, Nice WordPlay, OverAll Nice MAyne 8/10
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Thanks, both of you.
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for a keystyle, pretty str8 a lil basic but u got ur point across, i liked the flow on here, it left room for me to play with if i were to say it in audio, attempts at multis here and there.....but for a key pretty decent stay focused
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not bad it was a little off to me....but this was off the top so keep doing what u do....id like to see a little more punches...~1~
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Alright, I'll try doin more punches.
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Good stuff for a keystyle. And rofl @ the end. Not much else I can really say. -_- btw I don't agree that you need more punches, it's an OM, not a battle.
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