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wiley d 08-07-07 03:44 AM

who am i / losing my love
 
i put beef in the oven
and heat it up
hard like dick so yall wanna beat it up
like they tryin to jerk me
niggas tryin to hurt me
they make it hard to eat like beef jerky
streets work me
mommy always worry
cops comin so im in a hurry
judge lock me up in front of the jury
niggas try to do me dirty
its either live poor or get money until im burried




~~~~~~~//////Losing My Love//////~~~~~~~~~


i cant believe im gettin soft
i used to be like a light switch turning these bitches off
now im like a light switch turning these bitches on
leaving these bitches warm
pray to god cause my bitch is born
heart like letoya luckett cause its torn
they warned me love dont last like a car horn
i held her so much my arms sore

KM 08-07-07 07:40 PM

nice man but could still be worked on.....i dont think u put enough feeling into it....it gots potential though....~1~

*~F@M3-Iz~* 08-08-07 08:02 PM

This Shit Was Shit....I Mean I Aint Like It At All....The Second 1 Was Tons way Betta Then The First 1...But Still The Second 1 Could've Been Better....No Disrespect Just Bein Honest...

Clownaround 08-31-07 03:38 AM

man everyone so negative, just tryin to say both pretty dope

wiley d 09-01-07 01:20 PM

good lookin can i get more feed


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