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Git Dollaz 08-17-07 06:13 PM

tight lil freestyle
 
most of these rappas bitches...like fe-male dogs
aint neva packed a pistol...aint neva sold hard
aint neva hit the block...aint neva caught a charge
aint neva stole or robbed,pussy get up on yuh job
i promise ill neva starve,dont believe me ask-god
n when i hit yuh i-pod,you''ll be like is that-god
feelin me like a-massage,my team we stay in charge
a-r's to spray at cars,i aint laughin no har har
if blastin that four four,u ashes u no-more
yuh whore on all fours,legs open like car doors
i hit that pussy so hard,i make her arms sore
n when its war,ima shoot like ima small forward
i get a nigga for his loot,so i can ball more
stay out my face,if u curious then call george
get in my business u twitchin,blood it all pours
out yuh mouth or,head nigga the head nigga
im bout more,bread gettin fed wit that cheese
like a mouse for,them dollas i will lift that squeeze
u headin south dog

KM 08-17-07 06:57 PM

....ehhh ....this wasn't interesting at all the whole concept is played....gotta come more creative if u gonna do keystyles....get more complex to make your shit be like "Damn" when others read....work on punches/metas....and just all around being original and creative....~1~....4/10


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