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K-M vs Aurora Sky
Battle Rules:
20-30 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Beef Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-26-07 at 10:52 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - expired battle win |
K-M has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-07 10:53 PM.
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all right......
this kid not fuckin with me Aurora needs to back down.... leave this phony another dead insurgent when i attack with rounds.... shatter bones on this false identity obseen i be when ripping herbs.... i see the fear in your eyes looking shock as they flip and turn.... running over u is easy like road kill on abandon road ways.... u couldn't be "overloading" with "heated spits" blowing fire on propain.... strap my weapons together to surgically remove this kids lyrical progression... cause when i get inside Auroras head im leaving golf hole sized incisions.... im serving this kid another prime rib dish infected with ecoli and mad cow.... so its sad how skys cant lyrically blast so fowl face it kid your assed out.... this fuckers weak i'll break his arms and legs with only 10% of my hand grips.... you wont stand against me cause im still handling this geek im dismantlin..... u need to "stradegize" like "generals in the pentagon" to "plan a defeat" .... ask ya man quickly u just not harassing me... you couldn't be "hard with flows" taking hits on the chest from rapid water waves... i'll slaughter this brave and let him "really see skys" ..... .....u wont have to wait for "judgement day".... i struck this prey lyrically and ate his verse he put down on the line.... this clown outta die left with a frown with a bruised mind..... i "abuse lives" like Auroras cause hes "easy to pick on" like "bullies beating nerds"..... cause its time for u to learn your lesson so im not cooling down my nerves... smoothly i pound in work of a nail in the middle of auroras fore head.... in order to bleed out his intelligence to prove hes not as hardcore as he said.... your victory will "never be seen" like future K.I.A soldiers never seeing home.... we can go hand to hand fighting in combat i'll leave u another bleeding foe..... without weapons i'll still punish this so called warrior for treason acts...... cause i sonned u and u went against my authority giving me a reason to attack.... ~1~ |
ehhh my bad it being stretched but if u read it right u will notice i made it rhyme with multis or wordplay more than once in one line....thats why it seems stretched....
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Aurora Sky has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-07 05:47 AM.
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K-M best, na, i make an example of children despite any stance they get in,
cuz he says his lines are strecthed, just like his chances of winning! Km thinks he's a crafty guy, Sky's a battle fiend, raw rap mastermind, he can explain his whole verse and it still wont match with mine! Battle me bitch, i respond back similar to splittin an atom in half, can this kid, KM isnt fit to bare a hit, he cant even follow the flow, let alone handle it! StarTrek wannabe, from another galaxy, cuz ya bullshit is endless kid, family with the stars, hes not Chewbacca but his momma resembles him! Leave em with a loss for words, his verse aint hard, easy guy im sure, you aint worth 30 bars, its hard enough trying to get ppl to read 5 of yours! Ohh you sonned me? than consider this ass whoopin for the child support, wild for thought, whatever he's in, this guys lost, dont forget the force luke! Hungry for the win, cant match Sky's workmanship, we already heard ya bitch, worthless, i'd force feed you ya verse but i heard your already full of shit! 14 lines, i'd give you 20 but thats stretching the voters patience ;) plus it wasnt discussed b4 battle, gl mang' |
Let's get some votes, dont sleep, guaranteed honest RTF :thumbup:
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haha real nice i liked your verse alot......it was funny.....uppin on this someone vote!!!!!!!! |
blahhhhhhhhhhh vote please uppin...........~1~...............
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Voted For: K-M
K-M best, na, i make an example of children despite any stance they get in, cuz he says his lines are strecthed, just like his chances of winning! homie this line is PLAYED AS FUCK. I used similiar concept way back in '04. Come on now. But atleast you tried, I guess? 3/10 Km thinks he's a crafty guy, Sky's a battle fiend, raw rap mastermind, he can explain his whole verse and it still wont match with mine! umm.. where's the wit? you just stating shit. No creativity in that. 2/10 Battle me bitch, i respond back similar to splittin an atom in half, can this kid, KM isnt fit to bare a hit, he cant even follow the flow, let alone handle it! again, this was weak. All you do is state shit. come on now. Use some creativity. 2/10 StarTrek wannabe, from another galaxy, cuz ya bullshit is endless kid, family with the stars, hes not Chewbacca but his momma resembles him! ehh weak, could of added some wordplay or something. 3/10 Leave em with a loss for words, his verse aint hard, easy guy im sure, you aint worth 30 bars, its hard enough trying to get ppl to read 5 of yours! first bar that wasn't that bad actually 5/10 Ohh you sonned me? than consider this ass whoopin for the child support, wild for thought, whatever he's in, this guys lost, dont forget the force luke! NO! fuckin come on. Luke lines, force lines all so played, it;'s not even funny. This 1 was being generous 1/10 Hungry for the win, cant match Sky's workmanship, we already heard ya bitch, worthless, i'd force feed you ya verse but i heard your already full of shit! Blahh played again, weak concept as well 3/10 Overall, you don't include no wit or creativity in your verses. The read 5 of yours wasn't bad, but still if there was added wordplay and such, could of made it better. You just think stating shit's enough to get the win in text. Not gonna happen, you need to learn how to use creativity and wordplay. I've peeped your battles, and you haven't heard of them it looks like. Same with multi's. With all the talk, I thought you'd actually have something. But this was mediocre verse. 19/70 this kid not fuckin with me Aurora needs to back down.... leave this phony another dead insurgent when i attack with rounds.... ehh lacking any creativity, it's just ehh 3/10 shatter bones on this false identity obseen i be when ripping herbs.... i see the fear in your eyes looking shock as they flip and turn.... Same here, this just stating shit. No creativity 2/10 running over u is easy like road kill on abandon road ways.... u couldn't be "overloading" with "heated spits" blowing fire on propain.... Ha, not the best, but you playing around with some creativity here. So good shit 5/10 strap my weapons together to surgically remove this kids lyrical progression... cause when i get inside Auroras head im leaving golf hole sized incisions.... pretty cool here. Added some wit. Not bad. 4/10 im serving this kid another prime rib dish infected with ecoli and mad cow.... so its sad how skys cant lyrically blast so fowl face it kid your assed out.... Ehh it's ok. I see what you were trying but just ok 3/10 this fuckers weak i'll break his arms and legs with only 10% of my hand grips.... you wont stand against me cause im still handling this geek im dismantlin..... aww, you had it set up to go somewhere, but didn't come thru., But atleast you setting up lines nicely 3/10 u need to "stradegize" like "generals in the pentagon" to "plan a defeat" .... ask ya man quickly u just not harassing me... ehh decent 3/10 Overall, your verse wasn't too much better than Auroa's. But atleast you showing that you going in the right direction. You starting to learn how to use wordplay in some of your lines. Good stuff. Just add some multi's and you'll get there. But overall, you got this battle. Weak battle, but you the less weakest. 23/70 V/KM |
This was feedback posted for Aurora Sky
really cna't give a vote either way due to the fact that K-M's in my "crew".....but i'd have voted A.S.......
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ahhhh finally some votes and feedback lmao.....good lookin Spul and Aphillyate....yall stay up....uppin on this!!!..........~1~
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