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Kordozar 08-30-07 10:38 PM

Please Tell Me This
 
Who Won This Battle...Cats On Here Are Dick Eaters....



i call the shots like iowa bird gang, give you the silent treatment
call me the doctor, call you crazy; steroid discussions become frequent
sterilize the kordozone, realize that i remain atop the throne
the bronx is burning, but you wouldn't know remaining all at home, all-alone
times for you are hectic, damn right you lookin skeptic,
one more to kill, strike it off the checklist, i would expect it like a ban on wreckless
right or wrong, brains over braun i stay calm all along
you got tyrannosaurus arms, and dick lips like king kong
im the head of this bitch, meanwhile you can't even make it out the nostrils to climb
use your head, and make sure you don't hit it with the bottle this time

Or



Money Comes From Trees.........And Im Rich..................... So I Be Damaging Wood
On The Other Hand...Ya Bank Lacks More K's(0,000) Than The The Klan In The Hood
Scope On The Handgun Faggot You Can't Run Cause I Hit You From So Far Away
Leave Ya Body Stinking In The Woods.......Now Police Questioning Omar And Tae
King Of New York?Bull Crazy Tryina Win $50....You Up Against Me Ya Shots Over
Talkin Bout You Dealin White..............Dickhead Thats Was Really Ya Pops Soda
My Last Two Lines....Spitting That Shit You Aint Making Nowhere Ya Text Was Ass
But Im Glad You Went.Everybody Knows That They Always Save Tha Best For Last

Brother Anubis 08-30-07 10:47 PM

both suck .

La Cosa Nostra 08-31-07 12:51 AM

Neither..

-1 for both of you

Cola 08-31-07 11:39 AM

The second verus had better wordplay, if really any at all, but his wordplay had "ok"...and i say ok with a very big " ", but his wordplay had "ok" connection's....that was really the only thing going for either person, the first verus had a good flow and good words in the rhyme scheme that i thought were good, but as far as a good battle verus, the first one lacked alot of key points...

Vote: Second Guy


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