free style battle
 

I'll have an mc choking b4 he even dropped one bar
put him in a choke hold and tear his neck off hard
and u aint hard u aint stepping on me ur steppin on a grave
the grave i sent u in steppin to me ur stupid not brave
i consider u as a slave ur gay and ur too of a light weight
you see me steppin on u ur words i just dodge ur hate
cuz i know and u know ur fake but you cant face it
ur the wackest mc to hit this plannet u just embrace it lol
no good freestyles ur played out like a pack of cards
u bastards cant hit hard ur soft ur words cant create stars
u sound like ur from mars i punch u just for trying to rap
cuz ur purely crap wid ur work fuck u my raps leave u snapped
like u never should'a came here in fact u aint packin nothing
fuck punches i just make u jelous of the times me n ur gf bin humping

ehhh if this is how u battle u really need to work on it....im not no vet at battling and shit im still trying to elevate myself....but try working more on punches and personnels....be more creative and not so corny.....~1~

ok not bad.. but not great either... those punches need to be more specific.. more played to ur oppenent.. those lines can be used in ANY battle.. to do some real damage.. get some beef and info on ur oppenent... like look up some of his/hers old rhymes and lyrics and pull shit out of there... that could always work.. need to up ur word play too.. some of those lines are a little played.. and that crap about mars was lame... fix that lol.. rest was good i guess..keep it comin fams

Whack, closed & Moved.