Young Fear vs Aphillyate
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-20-07 at 11:35 AM

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Young Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-07 11:36 AM.

Aphillyate has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-07 11:38 AM.

hey bitch...you ever gonna post your faggot verus? My shits already done

You's a bitch bowin down to the knees of men
How this nigga gangsta when he ran from beezleten/
what the fuck was you thinkin..
Your ships sinking
Ill leave your eyes open dazed over no blinking/
Trying to be a man when you really just a kid
Homo, got another dudes words in your sig/
You seem gay, love to ride with no saddle
How you got all those damn posts and only 1 battle?/
You a backroad always wishing to be street
You a broken thermostat, you cant turn up the heat/
Ill rip you apart hands down no debate
So I appreciate the win you lettin me take/
You a holy bookbag you cant hold up weight
Like a drunk plastic surgeon Ill fuck up your face/
You got a Logan immune system
You cant get sick/
The rainbow coalition's all you aphillyated with/

i dont even give a shit....

This win i could use, I'll abuse this dude, how the fuck can i loose?
He's old new's! I use cue's, so here's one...
...........................Catch the L, no mo' friends--i mean internet crew!
Come on bitch,winnin this bout-- that just can't happen
I'll Kipnap ya, cuz the... only votes ya getting, is Rasum
Destroyin my foes, i leave ya 'hitch' on 'cock' like crows
Fool, I hit this kid up....we call it embroytic blows
Ya name...more meaning than one...your dimishied
Everyone askin Y? F. ....cuz Y.our F.inished

Voted For: Aphillyate

well aphill killed it here my vote goes to him....cleaner and smoother flow....well put together...and the punches were nice...9/10

young fear ...i see u tryed a little bit harder than other shit ive seen from u....but i can also tell u were forcing shit together....some of your punches need to be worked on...but nice try anyways just keep workin on it an elevating....

~1~ yall stay up

1-0 upppin this bullshit

This was feedback posted for Aphillyate
 

i think Aphillyate got my vote let me brake it down

fav lines from {Young Fear}

You seem gay, love to ride with no saddle
How you got all those damn posts and only 1 battle?/

You a holy bookbag you cant hold up weight
Like a drunk plastic surgeon Ill fuck up your face/

this was ok your strutre was tidy ya vocab was not bad
flow wast to good but no hatin i jus think aphilli came harder
but keep battlin

fav lines from {Aphillyate}

Destroyin my foes, i leave ya 'hitch' on 'cock' like crows
Fool, I hit this kid up....we call it embroytic blows

...........................Catch the L, no mo' friends--i mean internet crew!
Come on bitch,winnin this bout-- that just can't happen

you came hard in this battle ya flow was tight ya vocad was good structre not to bad overall you came out better


nice battle


vote=Aphillyate




take a vote on mine to pay tha fava(;

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Voted For: Aphillyate

Ya name...more meaning than one...your dimishied
Everyone askin Y? F. ....cuz Y.our F.inished

vs.

nothing


v/aphillyate

3-0 uppin for more votes

Uppinnnn. Nobody ever votes. You got the win either way, I just forgot to put the tko thing.3-0

aaannnnddddddddd another vote is needed

Voted For: Aphillyate

lol... 18 lines vs 8... lmao aph u had this one.. better punches... fear's punches were weak and could have been used universal ( on anybody) more mutlies too.
nice work... but overall pretty basic rhyme schyme and u could bump up those punches...

Voted For: Young Fear

v/ Young Fear

Aphillyate... your first bar was stretched. You came with good concepts but some of the punches were lacking. Could of reworded some of your bars to hit much harder. Good overall I give ya a 6/10

Young Fear... good stuff from you. Most of your punches were hard hitting. Good concepts. Didn't beat him by much but your punches is what gave you my vote. 7/10