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scanz 10-30-07 12:03 AM

a prophet's prophet
 
as i stare in the distance leaves blowin in the wind.
my mind strays from the path and my lungs lack oxygen.
im lost again, help me flow back on the track.
help me back to the arms where love is never lacked.
where love is abundante, her love? i love it!!
my heart is her track, and guess what... she runs it!
she does shit... to me, packing my lungs so i cant breath.
her vibrante glow makes me stutter so i can speak.
she a beauty so deep, her love tends to creep.
like i do when i take stuff that dont belong to me.
this reality? this destiny? this fantasy threw seldom thoughts?
no, it cant be, it wont be cus she the only love i got.
only love i want, all others are stiffer then pissed rocks.
why would i want then, when me and u can just talk.
just go for walks, chillin, sittin back, smiling and laughin.
i write pieces of art, masterpieces.... that i call rapping.
ur thoughts? a-stounding. ur love? its bounding.
our love together? to high of a number to be counting.
to high of an altitude for drowning we vaster then space.
i can see it in ur face, baby you just wanna find your place.
ive told u where it was... by me, together forever...
one from janurary the other september, together they contenders.
under any weather they walk, one charming one a go getter.
one carrys 2 hearts and the other a 45 berreta.
one a trendsetter, the other follows his own trend.
they make there own groups who have there own friends.
and in the end? they could walk miles by the thousand.
leaving intials in the sand saying Lilly + Calvin...
forever laughin, grabbing each others hand.
this the prophecy of the flaka.. and a legend named lil'scanz
its a trend that cant be broken, jokin is for clowns and comics.
this a bend that got me chokin, dunno what she has, but what ever it is she got it rockin...
im no longer talkin garbage... this girl worrys bout my very soul.
ill write her love songs, and love lyrics and even love poems.
my love is slow. and hers is patient, but i hate waiting...
ill wait for her till the end of time if it ment being hated...
or discrimanated, out-dated and being called un lento.
ppl wouldnt give a fuck either si sienten lo que yo siento.
esta chavalita me tiene loco como un bolo en la calle.
caminando solo sin rencor, dominando todo silence.
her love is like a riot, everybody loves it but they dont no why.
i know i love her cus her love just drives me wild.

scanz 10-30-07 12:08 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244363
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3189761

scanz 10-30-07 10:40 PM

yo ppl.. i want some feedback.. will return feed on ur posts

scanz 11-01-07 07:16 PM

uppin the wonder bread

scanz 11-05-07 07:36 PM

uppin this shit... feed of it ppl

Antonio Banderas 11-06-07 03:11 AM

Hey Scanz,

This piece was pretty descent. You did a descent job with the content of your writing and this was a nice length. It seems to be more of a poetic piece.

T lite 11-07-07 02:18 PM

I peeped some of your other pieces, and this one was coo.
It's more my style than "scribble scribble" for example.
This was a real poetic piece, kinda thought it deserved to be in poetic scriptures, but it's no biggie.

My fave lines would prolly have to be the first two, they were really deep.
Keep spittin' bro!

scanz 11-07-07 03:47 PM

my next piece is a collab piece called a broken dream.. if u want it no doubt hit me up or somethin gonna be more like ur style ¨poetic¨ and more like my style ¨fantasy¨ pm me if u want in

wiley d 11-09-07 08:37 PM

damn yo i can fuck with this, this was basically how i felt a while ago

scanz 11-10-07 04:16 AM

no doubt.. this is how i feel every day bout this girl... at this point... im hella drunk but if u wanna collab on any piece send me a pm and im down...

KM 11-27-07 10:35 PM

nice scanz.......not one of the best ive seen from you though.....still a good topic....but i feel u can up it a little bit ....seems like somethings missing from this piece to me.....but keep writing ....doing what u do...8/10.....~1~


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