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.Ike. 11-26-07 07:52 PM

New Song...Black Rose Red Rose
 
i dont even know if this site is still active...but i decided to record this poem i wrote...made it into a verse cause it fit this song well...it was an open collab street fab productions had.....i went acapella at the start to give it the poem feel..and went on the beat at the end..

www.myspace.com/ikeseanbillzblackmagik


if this site is still active...whats up with everybody here?

JPoll 11-26-07 09:03 PM

you're delivery shines, quality is great...flow on point, would have liked it to have been a little longer, i like bars, although its not a song like that. I'm impressed, what have you been up to lately?

return if you have a second

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3194378

peace
we should collab and build

Jay Rose 11-26-07 09:49 PM

pretty deep mr. turner....

on the accapella the lows feel like they are too high....drop em a tad n it should sound a lil better....its either the lows or the lower mids....but it makes your voice too colored....some reverb or a real low echo would make the voice sound better too....but i like the poem....deep...introspective....real.....

btw wheres that trip you n bmagik tape? still waiting on that shit

Jay Rose 11-26-07 09:50 PM

drop some shit on my track up in here too....mostly lookin for quality tips if you can give any


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