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L.E 12-28-07 02:11 PM

More Of My Bro Music
 
This is the link to my brothers myspace......he wants some more feedback on all his newest songs....


www.myspace.com/djqproductionscan

KOOL COL-B 12-28-07 02:26 PM

you guys are from drayton valley? my friend used to go there to strip, lol, werd

L.E 12-28-07 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by KOOL COL-B
you guys are from drayton valley? my friend used to go there to strip, lol, werd


Lol what?

Do you know a guy named Mike that lived here and I think he just moved back?

KOOL COL-B 12-28-07 03:07 PM

nah, tha only person i know that went to drayton valley wuz my stripper friend, and her name iznt Mike, lol.

but you never know, so many people from NS go out there to work scence theres no jobs here. hmmmm, duz tha Mike guy have a crooked tounge, and he always sounds mentally challenged cuz of it? cuz i know a guy named Mike that went out there to work, but i'm not sure exactly what town it iz. werd

L.E 12-28-07 03:33 PM

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Originally Posted by KOOL COL-B
nah, tha only person i know that went to drayton valley wuz my stripper friend, and her name iznt Mike, lol.

but you never know, so many people from NS go out there to work scence theres no jobs here. hmmmm, duz tha Mike guy have a crooked tounge, and he always sounds mentally challenged cuz of it? cuz i know a guy named Mike that went out there to work, but i'm not sure exactly what town it iz. werd


Tall, thinks he can rap. Was friends with strippers.

KOOL COL-B 12-28-07 04:06 PM

oh, then nah, never heard of him, haha, werd

L.E 12-28-07 04:41 PM

Was the strip club Blue Oasis?

I imagine so, cause it's the only strip joint in town.

KOOL COL-B 12-28-07 05:06 PM

lol, yeah, that's it. you ever go there? werd

L.E 12-28-07 07:31 PM

I was there once. They played on of my songs there one time...It's not the greatest place to go lol. Most of the strippers are nasty.

La Cosa Nostra 12-28-07 08:20 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by L.E
This is the link to my brothers myspace......he wants some more feedback on all his newest songs....


www.myspace.com/djqproductionscan

Your bro needs to learn to write lyrics...

majorly...


needs to learn how to flow properly..........better rhyme techniques........some of these lines man.........its like someones doing a comedy spoof of gangsta rap...

What the fuck ay...


Aim higher..........show him some binary star and JMT... hes probably listening to wack music....


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