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Brydon 12-31-07 12:23 AM

sonny barz. vs dunmenuts
 
Battle Rules:

6-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-03-08 at 12:23 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 12-31-07 12:23 AM

dunmenuts has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-07 12:23 AM.

Brydon 12-31-07 01:07 AM

sonny barz, mr same style dodgy layout,
thinks his the best on this site.................
WTF you jus escaped or is it your day out??? lol
Chattin bout punch line champ, wot punches???
You a little bitch,Y else would you wear ur hair in bunches.....
Fly-E going you mite as well fold up,
coz his owned up+gone,now who u gonna run 2.....
coz even he know ur ass jus bout 2 be tossed up!!!
Acting like your known in the game,leader of the B-E-S-T,
I'l pop you quicker then a dude would do E-C-T-A-C-Y.
I spose your abit like a drug..........
when you talk your sound a mug(makes us laugh/happy),
then your sad+cry(comedown) then ask your crew 4 a hug.
Mocking me+shit,boy who the fuck are you???
Your less fuckin popular then sum tramp who plays the didgerydoo..................

Brydon 12-31-07 01:10 AM

whoops thats mena b ecstacy.....................

good luck dawg

System 12-31-07 12:27 PM

Sonny Barz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-31-07 12:27 PM.

Brydon 12-31-07 03:45 PM

yo y didnt u drop ur shit??????? going to revise or sunin ???? come on peace!!!!!!!!!!!

Sonny Barz. 01-01-08 11:09 PM

i was out celebratin' new years thats why i aint drop earlier.


Dunmenuts thought he could see this BOY-IN-RAPPIN'
so i'ma 'give em his first loss' like 'FLOYD-DID-HATTON'!
you faggot...you never had a CHICK-YOU-FUCKED-WIT
ya sex life is like ya name....
it's got 'MEN' in the MIDDLE-OF-IT!
u LITTLE-PUPPET. i'll attack ya rec wit LINES-TO-BLAZE
til it says "0-1"...to match the year ya LINES-WERE-MADE!
u a BROKE-FUCK whose never hustled for THOSE-BUCKS
'Krispy Kreme shoppin' is the only time u had 'DOE,-NUTS'!
u SLOW-FUCK! thought u wud win?? that AINT-GREAT
your mind must even be gay, cuz it cant THINK-STRAIGHT!
my PUNCH-STRIKE-BRUTAL, it'll BUST-RIGHT-THRU-YOU
n' i wud've Ate you....but i dont eat NUTS-LIKE-YOU-DO!

good luck.

Brydon 01-01-08 11:54 PM

that was actually not a bad drop mayne, nice 1 peace

ILL GEE 01-02-08 07:27 PM

Voted For: Sonny Barz.

lmao... deffo the funnier and more clever verse... weakest line... "krispy kreme shopping"... best line... "it's got MEN in the middle of it"....lmao

dun... deffo better than the last battle i voted on ...kudos for elevating... opening line was funny as hell.... if the rest of ya verse lived up to the opener it woulda been a cakewalk for ya... not too many good battles left on this site but this is the best i've seen so far in a while...

but...gotta go with Barz on this one

Fly-E 01-02-08 08:19 PM

This was feedback posted for Sonny Barz.
 
good job fam! I aint leavin for good jus for a bit dunmenuts and i think u got this sonny but it was a decent battle!

J. Luth 01-03-08 12:13 AM

Voted For: Sonny Barz.

sonny actually made sense and isn't a chav yo............

T lite 01-03-08 01:01 AM

Voted For: Sonny Barz.

Sonny took this fairly easily. You had some DAMN lines, then you had some played out let downs.

My favorite lines were:

you faggot...you never had a CHICK-YOU-FUCKED-WIT
ya sex life is like ya name....
it's got 'MEN' in the MIDDLE-OF-IT! <-- LMAO.....nice!

u LITTLE-PUPPET. i'll attack ya rec wit LINES-TO-BLAZE
til it says "0-1"...to match the year ya LINES-WERE-MADE! <-- Was feelin' this shit too.

Wasn't feelin' the Krispy Kreme and think straight lines, they're mad played. The ender was a little played as well, but I thought you flipped it fairly nicely.


Good stuff guys, keep at it.

KM 01-03-08 02:42 AM

Voted For: Sonny Barz.


dun-
sonny barz, mr same style dodgy layout,
thinks his the best on this site.................
WTF you jus escaped or is it your day out??? lol

^^^^^^^^???? eeehhhh no

Chattin bout punch line champ, wot punches???
You a little bitch,Y else would you wear ur hair in bunches.....

^^^^^^^^weak attempt at a punch

Fly-E going you mite as well fold up,
coz his owned up+gone,now who u gonna run 2.....
coz even he know ur ass jus bout 2 be tossed up!!!

^^^^^^^^ehhh just not enough

Acting like your known in the game,leader of the B-E-S-T,
I'l pop you quicker then a dude would do E-C-T-A-C-Y.

^^^^^^best and extacy dont rhyme and this punch attempt is too simple

I spose your abit like a drug..........
when you talk your sound a mug(makes us laugh/happy),
then your sad+cry(comedown) then ask your crew 4 a hug.

^^^^^had some attempt but didn't follow through all the way ended up fallin off

Mocking me+shit,boy who the fuck are you???
Your less fuckin popular then sum tramp who plays the didgerydoo..................

^^^^^^ wtf ...corny punch just wack.....

overall u didn't do so good u fell off in this...no hate though ....but guess this one of your first battles w/e.....better luck next time....just keep practicing and you'll elevate....i say try practicing in the cypher section ....it might help....~1~


sonny-
Dunmenuts thought he could see this BOY-IN-RAPPIN'
so i'ma 'give em his first loss' like 'FLOYD-DID-HATTON'!

^^^^^lol nice
you faggot...you never had a CHICK-YOU-FUCKED-WIT
ya sex life is like ya name....
it's got 'MEN' in the MIDDLE-OF-IT!

^^^^^^lolzz
u LITTLE-PUPPET. i'll attack ya rec wit LINES-TO-BLAZE
til it says "0-1"...to match the year ya LINES-WERE-MADE!

^^^^^^nice
u a BROKE-FUCK whose never hustled for THOSE-BUCKS
'Krispy Kreme shoppin' is the only time u had 'DOE,-NUTS'!

^^^^^^ehhh not feelin it that much but still all right....
u SLOW-FUCK! thought u wud win?? that AINT-GREAT
your mind must even be gay, cuz it cant THINK-STRAIGHT!

^^^^^lolz haha
my PUNCH-STRIKE-BRUTAL, it'll BUST-RIGHT-THRU-YOU
n' i wud've Ate you....but i dont eat NUTS-LIKE-YOU-DO!

^^^^^eh not bad could of been a little better.....

overall sonny won this cause of way harder punches....there gettin better to.....as always u kill it with multis....good shit for a short battle verse....~1~

Brydon 01-03-08 10:03 AM

thanks for voting guys, nice 1. Good job sonny, nice work!! no offence, it surprized me alittle, thought u wasnt as gud as that, how wrong can i be lol.Il give you another battle soon as you've used most of the punches of my name lol, its my poker name lol.Good work peace



p.s spul loves tim westwood, wot a faggot.

Big_O 01-05-08 01:02 AM

Voted For: Sonny Barz.

Sonny Barz nice disses and solid flow

Favorite line - "it's got 'MEN' in the MIDDLE-OF-IT"

Nice Keep It Up

Dunmenuts dont laugh at your own punch lines dude, But you need to work on your punchlines bro sierously...


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