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L.E 01-04-08 03:40 PM

"Unlucky"...COMPLETE...L.E and 286...Fire.
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...&songID=6133972

Check that shit out fools.

I'll return the favour.

:shoot:

Tha .Q 01-04-08 03:44 PM

Both u and 286 are suckas man!

Talkin bout collabin...

shut my ass out


it's like that...


gotcha



;)






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Jay Rose 01-04-08 04:10 PM

haha Q song time asap....that was an open collab tho, put something together like that for me ill be on a song in a week....but what chu think of the song tho?

L.E 01-04-08 04:23 PM

Fine then.

L.E, Q, and 286 collab.

47.29" of Zigs 01-04-08 06:19 PM

its a cool track

limited tryin to act hard kinda makes me giggle just never see u as hard lol

BigTony.Self 01-04-08 06:46 PM

its to bad kids wont simply use the songs forum ....this shits retarded!

L.E 01-04-08 07:11 PM

You know what...

That's a good point.

Fuck it I'll open it in the songs forums.

Close this.

47.29" of Zigs 01-04-08 07:21 PM

see there u go bein soft again

Tha .Q 01-04-08 11:15 PM

LE...ur presence on track is bit ...and, your flow could use a bit of work...


It's solid...but, it's too predictable...



is this 286?...sounds angry...flow fits the tone of the track...


beat is good...a lil slow for my tastes...but w/e


Hook is decent...a tad lackluster...but, it's aiight


decent track





lots of "faggots" being tossed around...NO PUN



last verse...is that jay? w/e...all consistent

villagepimp 01-05-08 04:09 AM

What... The fuck.

Okay, the hook's kinda lame...

LE your all over the beat... you need to do a better job at staying on the beat man!

286 is okay, but I'm not sure what the hell your attempting to do half of it.

Meh, I can listen to it a second time, but it's not your best work Chad.

L.E 01-05-08 11:15 AM

Really?

O_O.

47.29" of Zigs 01-05-08 04:51 PM

damn vp be sippin on some HATERAIDE! nigga burn!


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