heres another..feedback plz
 

im bringin flames to the game simply because/
i put the bandage on the game cause its suffurin cuts/
thats drippin wit blood from camera thugs/
thinkin they hard but when we meet they be scared of a slug/
but how is that when ya ni**az be claimin you hood?/
floss flaggin ni**az tell me now are u crip or you blood?/
f**k wit me now muthaf***a im wishin you would/
find ya body by the trees in the leaves in some woods?/
im comin closer to the game all i need is a nudge/
to be colser to the light and be bigger than suge/ (knight)
come on test me nobody is messin wit weez/
i wish you would run up on me in the streets/
a right hook to the face will make u lay in the street/
and leave u wit no left eye like TLC/