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Tu 03-01-08 07:53 AM

Hello
 
....dusts shoulders....left left...right right





my rebels revel in heaven several levels ahead of you
got a message to bless it…"its my immeasurable pleasure fool"
im Intrepid n’ steppin on methods messin ya follicles
im the prodigal prophet, vomit a sonnet on top of you
droppin drama still classical, like im opera boxin you
while im mockin you comical like Osama to opticals
I’m that ominous oracle throwing karma on obstacles
offer optimal phonics like torrid torrents Unstoppable
best believe that im current…“I’m riding waves to Phenomenal”
try to faze me impossible pop a bomb in ya possibles
fill a grave with illogical…like a holocaust natzi will
laying waste to ya articles disembarkin your particles
I’m an arsonist cardinal…blazin rhyme in ya arsenal
Incarcerated I made it…like im Mandela remarkable
flowin arsenic lyricals…with regards to your physical
I’m an artist spittin bullets got a whole amour ceutical
know my scripture is beautiful every line is invincible
introduce it… gettin deeper than the devil in principle
Fucken martyr im biblical, fed ya mind with a miracle
cos i’ll bite ya fucken head off…rip ya cartilage literal






.......Tu





http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245389
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=245548

Ysdat 03-01-08 08:09 PM

dope.

Multis are nuts. Metas are on point. Decent vocab though out the entire thing.

'comical like Osama to opticals'

Stood out like amother fucker. Good read bro, stay dropping.

SkepTik 03-02-08 03:29 AM

^^^ i agree with wat he said fosho i liked the vocab alot tho bro good drop overall def worht reading main....1 stay up!!!

Ransum 03-03-08 08:49 AM

the flow was sick... shit was like a water fall....
the multis was crazy... like an artistic kid life...
the vocab was nice... like walking an old lady across the street...
but the punches... werent really there.... like a ghost...

so to sum this whole open mic up...

shit was retartedly dope like a smoking a pound in 1 day...

cool fucking drop kid...

hope to see more....

TonZ 03-03-08 08:19 PM

hell yea this was dpe for sure dude nice

TonZ 03-03-08 08:20 PM

Ransum is a bitch

Tu 03-04-08 06:34 AM

good looks on the feed, look out for the collab with Gotsoul, "view from my window"

r0gue. 03-10-08 12:16 AM

Quote:
im Intrepid n’ steppin on methods messin ya follicles
im the prodigal prophet, vomit a sonnet on top of you


One of your best lines that I liked over the rest.
Good vocab and metaphors, I liked the multi's flow through the piece.

Keep Writing.


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