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Art of Life
Art of life
We destroy nations and create relations Hate corrupt leaders, but love the money that makes them Spend money to break, spend more to create Love makes it easier, but its less harder to hate So the foundation is fake, but still build on its plates Dont know it when its feint, but relate when it becomes great Love thy sister, love ty brother, pray to thy father To keep thy mother from danger when evil starts to harbor If you have woman then call her, have a man then love him Understand thats when its matter of love, put nothing above them Only Thy god, and pray she makes you feel heavenly But we will change tunes when we get use to the melody Then its hate thy sister, kill thy brother Disgrace thy father, abandon thy mother Hate and love bind together in the storm Sort of like a twister so it like... So love is life,and hate is love So we love to hate thy life Change it once change it twice Change it more we dont remember what it was like Forget who I am, but I know who I be Ask about my past, and i'll claim its still me Ask about my future, and i'll claim I'll be he Ask about me now, I wont know who I see I can't tell you about the art I created I can't tell you about the art I'll create I can tell you about the art that is fake Even if my art resembles it. My art will be great Replace art with life, and you'll know my mind state... Another quick peotry verse. might just stay text. Might drop it as some poetic acapella....will drop some links in next post....Holla |
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now this is the degree of talent that i was hoping you would display in the last drop. you word usage was definatly on point. even if its not used as an acapella, i could here some people bumpin this wit the right tune and the right flow. got lost in the middle for about three lines but besides that it kept my attention grasped at full force from top to bottom. all in all a very good drop
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lol Sorry to dissapoint. But yeah I appreciate the feed man. I had to think about the track first. At the end i tried to flip everything around by saying trade Art with life. And life with art to show things have another meaning. Art of life. Life of Art. But yeah. I'll try and be more active cuz i need to practice my writing skills some more so i can transfer it over into my actual tracks.... stay tuned......
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Hmmm....feeling the flow on this real fluent, so i take that as your focal point of the piece and would go very well tracc wise, a much better thoughtout drop from your last one, more time and effort and you really did ya thing i must admit, vocabulary wasn't as expected but for audio don't really need big words ya kno, imagry was ok, emotion was pretty decent, structure well the structure of an audio drop lyrics wise will usually be different do to the fact of breathe control and flow difference no one really flows the same so i didn't have a problem with your structure. Props on the drop. I don't rate just know if i say props im impressed.
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good drop,deep writing, real good wordplay, i liked the beggining felt like you tryed to force it a little at the end..but overall good drop 8/10
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