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Speats 05-07-08 05:07 PM

Speats feat. Guilty - Born In The City
 
Yup a quick song I did last week, been a long time I didnt post nothing on rapverse

www.soundclick.com/Backtownproductions

left feed on cold heart and Bad Habbits

Ill RTF

L.E 05-07-08 06:22 PM

Listening...

Beat is decent man, did you make this?

Flow comes in pretty solid man...you've elevated alot yourself. Flow falls off a bit in some parts, but nothing tragic. Delivery was pretty good...not bad at all man. Didn't like the second verse as much, but solid anyway.

Third verse was decent, a little sketchy in the flow department, and I wasn't feeling some of your lyrics. Delivery was monotonous...meh. Not bad, room to elevate though.

Keep it up man.

Speats 05-07-08 06:50 PM

thanks man ...up

Ysdat 05-08-08 02:31 AM

Returning feed.


Damn this beats nice, samples smooth. Flows a bit shakey in places man, not feeling the high pitched parts at the end of your bars imo. Qualitys cool, some good mixing in this. Its a cool track, I think flow lets it down man.

Damn whats this beat, email me the beat

mister.t.davis@gmail.com :thumbup:

_Talksic_ 05-08-08 05:58 AM

youve definatly improved alot sence the last time i heard one of your songs, you seem more confident on a beat,youve got a wider vocabulary..is dude in the last verse spitting in french? i thought that sounded pretty tight.
overall good drop i was feeling it,youve def improved.

Speats 05-08-08 06:57 AM

thanks for the feed yall, yeah the last verse is in french

Speats 05-15-08 03:20 PM

upppp..............

Jay Royal 05-19-08 04:10 AM

I really liked the beat and you've really elevated since last time. I keep listening the track every now and then. Just had to log on and tell you how much you've made progress. Keep working on your stuff. Nice track. peace.

GKillaz05 05-19-08 09:34 PM

siick man.. I didnt know you was still droppin' shit..
your flow got mad siick eh? dope shit fam.. fealin' it.. tight rhymes.
beat is pretty decent, hook is niice.
get at me speats im needin' some beats mayne...
...and maybe a verse or two, we aint made a track in a minute bro...

Speats 05-20-08 10:06 AM

Thank appreciate the feed yall

Enygma 05-21-08 10:35 PM

You suck......I've had this beat for a minute, I just haven't written to it yet :(


I guess if you snooze you lose.



I'm gonna use it anyway :thumbup:



Oh yeah, nice track.....lol.

Artikulate 05-22-08 08:13 AM

Beat was straight.
1st verse had the best delivery,2nd verse actually sounded like someone else for a bit because the delivery was so different. Like someone said earlier, I wasnt really feelin the high-pitched end to some of ur bars. Ur flow was straight. Keep improvin...peace

SUPERVILLAIN 05-22-08 10:09 AM

speats...

...been tryna get at you for a minute on aim...hollar back bruh.


esvee

Speats 05-23-08 12:56 PM

Only got msn , unless you have it too

Ebircs 05-23-08 09:37 PM

like the beat n samples a lot man....

flows on, the overdubs r a bit much maybe to loud idk kinda dround u out

not bad, the accent fucks me up tho

defo ellevated


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