Satan ( 2 ) vs Mauvais Loup ( 0 )
 

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Line limits:
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Goodluck.

Satan, you better not stand me up, this is our first meeting ;)

let's take it to the max, going 20 fam, g/l.

I would never

I am going to diss on your lama somehow

lmao its a sheep.

or is it....


lmao at llama though.

its a wolf in sheeps clothing...

so basically his sig is saying that hes a fraud?

lmao I guess..or he's sneaky as fuck.

What is with all the freeposting in your battle?

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you got ya Animal Kingdom confused...ya not a Beast and i don't want drama
but fuck Guerilla Warfare, i swear Alpaca Gat next time you call my sig a Llama!
my punches'll leave you Outta Comission, ya Boss'll be ready to commit crime
fuckin nerd, i'll Break You on the Net to kill the Compensatin' at the same time!


you've scored one Field Goal but that's soon to change with this defeat, hoe
coz you couldn't beat me Buying Ill Punches...let alone win on Free Throws!
ya ugly as fuck...
...you could have Jeezy or Kanye money, you still can't get a hoe to lay with, dog
if you Put On for ya city...for the first time you'd hear bitches yellin, "Take It Off!"
you're all Talk, Show your Heart and i guarantee your Breastbone'll hurt some
coz i Pound Pussy so hard and deep, everyone'd think that i'ma Howard Stern'um!
you can admit to everyone you a Redneck, the votes might be close to Ten-Fo'...
...me, but i swear if you ever Radio In......we're all throwin ours out the window!
i'm Sonnin you and that's a well known fact, you can't even fuck with my fights
coz i'm Beatin you so bad that after this battle...i won't even have Visiting Rights!
you speak but say nothin, i do all my talkin with the punches from my fist
Satan, i'll T off on you all day and guarantee that you still ain't Sa'an shit!

16. g/l

First meeting it is mayne, and i didn't even know it was u, come to find out
Might as well have been like a blind date, the way i'm scratchin Jay's eyes out
I know you want a piece of me fam, and you can try it yourself
But title shots? Jay i don't fuck around, you'l get lashings by my belt
You crowd ain't shit get whats given dude, you really suck to be honest
I'll just leave you alone on these streets.......and hope you die of natural causes
I was wrong before you got game fam, i wouldn't piss you off and then fight
Cuz jay'll come out the coner swingin........with americas finest transvestite
I feel for you though brah, bein a pussy sux, so you could never contain me
See, I'm all about putting my dukes up, while jay just wears daisy's
Now i don't know where your games gone fam, were u eva good, who knew
Cuz i'll bet you anything that lama/sheep licks more pussy than you do
People be lyin, you ain't the fireman, i'll shatter you, you'l get displaced kid
They only say you write fire so they can get a chace to stomp your face in
So jay you'd never be better than me, just admit it, this whore ain't got taste
So about that closing argument.......thats lay shutting the door in your face

you got ya Animal Kingdom confused...ya not a Beast and i don't want drama
but fuck Guerilla Warfare, i swear Alpaca Gat next time you call my sig a Llama!
...you could have Jeezy or Kanye money, you still can't get a hoe to lay with, dog
if you Put On for ya city...for the first time you'd hear bitches yellin, "Take It Off!"
i'm Sonnin you and that's a well known fact, you can't even fuck with my fights
coz i'm Beatin you so bad that after this battle...i won't even have Visiting Rights!
you speak but say nothin, i do all my talkin with the punches from my fist
Satan, i'll T off on you all day and guarantee that you still ain't Sa'an shit!

vs.

I know you want a piece of me fam, and you can try it yourself
But title shots? Jay i don't fuck around, you'l get lashings by my belt
I was wrong before you got game fam, i wouldn't piss you off and then fight
Cuz jay'll come out the corner swingin........with americas finest transvestite

v/Muavais Loop

Satan you need to work on your set ups and wording better cuz ur concepts are alright but when u word them into punches they aint as hard as they could be, and Mauvais fix ur fucked up structure homie lol

I really didn't like either if your verses. Loup, your punches weren't very hard hitting at all, except for one or two that hit a little. Satan, yours weren't very hard hitting either, except that daisy one made me laugh. You had the right idea, just like JTR said, word them better so they connect. You both need to work on using wit and humor, and directing your punches better at your opponent. I was going to quote some lines but there wasn't much worth talking about.

V/Loup.

PS- Lose the fuckin' ilatics, bro. Fucks with my eyes. Lol.

This was actually alot closer battle than these votes are gonna make it seem. It came down to Loup havin like 2 more quotables than Satan had. You both had some okay verses, you just kinda lacked in consistency. Ya both had soem funny punches in there..as kirk mentioned. Good battle.

v/Mauv