*Contendorship Match* Ramcees ( 5 ) vs. Flight ( 5 )
 

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Check...16

.............

yeah, whatever.

fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull
yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you
and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes
see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles
there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram
i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts
this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it
so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep

kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher
Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze
u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground
dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down!
Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes?
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too!
im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you
I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen
u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1

fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull
weak
yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you
no
and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes
wackerz
see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles
too obvious of nameplay w/o a punch. and i'm sure it's played on him.
there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram
seen it used better on him
i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts
again, seen better.
this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it
too bland
so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep
i've used this concept and imo, i used it better.

you really need to work on your wording. you had some decent concepts (although mostly played) but i've seen them worded so much better. your wording lacks sting which takes away from your entire verse.


kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher
played and weak wording.
Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze
bland.
u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground
this seems too obvious but cool nameplay.
dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down!
weak.
Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes?
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too!
ok.
im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you
ok, cool
I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen
no, that was corny.
u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1
played

i've seen you drop way better than this. idk wtf you were doing here, if you took it easy or what.

disappointed in this battle, though i'd have at least one decent verse to read...ram had better wording.

vote-Ramcees

Flight
fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull
Not bad, I dig it.
yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you
This is sick.
and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes
Nice, good punch.
see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles
Not bad.
there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram
Not bad.
i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts
Hahaha, good shit.
this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it
Meh
so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep
Perfect.

Vs.

Ramcees
kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher
Generic.
Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze
Nah.
u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground
Nice.
dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down!
Okay.
Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes?
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too!
Nice.
im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you
Not bad.
I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen
Nah
u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1
Meh

Not a bad battle I suppose, but I have Flight taking this, so yeah..

Vote: Flight

kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher
^Naaaah.

Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze
^Naaaah.

u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground
^Pretty good.

dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down!
^Naaaah.

Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes?
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too!
^Not bad.

im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you
^Not bad.

I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen
Naaaah.

u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1
^Alright.



fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull
^Decent.

yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you
^Naaah.

and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes
^Haha.

see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles
^Pretty sick.

there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram
^Pretty sick. Though I've seen a similar concept.

i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts
^Lmao.

this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it
^Haha.

so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep
^Haha.

Damn. Pretty good battle. I thought as I started reading Flight's verse that he wouldn't take this, but he really picked it up and came with some funny ass punches and that were very consistent. Ram, you had a pretty good verse but it fell off at some points. Great battle though.

V/Flight

pretty close battle. i'm gonna have to go with flight. started off kinda slow but really picked up near the end and took it home. it could have just as easily swung either way and there is no real wrong answer.

vote: flight

v/ Flight.. I dont wanna get detailed
buuttt he had a few more punches hittin harder,,


When you vote make sure you go into a little more detail, state a few punches you liked or disliked etc. One or two line voting will not count, but seeing as this isn't a deciding vote I'll let it slide. Just try to get a little more detailed next time man. Thanks

-Lay

fuck this bitch, lets switch it up, i'll be the one to push and pull
so i take this Ram by the horns, cause he's got a hold of all the bull
this was pretty weak, the ram nameplay could been used better
yeah thats right, you're shit, and don't act like its not fucking true
see i'm fly for real... they just fucking buzz around you
dopeness yo still could worded it better tho but +1
and what a fucking loser, seriously, i'm tired of being nice
cause when he says 'check 16', thats just the fucking girls he likes
lol i the check 16 was aight, but u ruined it with the wording
see my name is for my punches, so bitch, my hits wont be subtle
cause when i fucking spit, i'll make sure Ramcees nothing but knuckles
nah weak wordplay
there's just no dodging me, i'm dropping hot, and never stop attacking, man
cause when i bring in my seige, i just keep fucking battering Ram
dope wordplay +2
i'll shut ya down, seriously i'm not playing, no need to make it tragic
i'm getting rid of RAM faster than computer porn addicts
was aight +3
this battle is a joke, you bow to me, so just fucking stop, bitch
cause if you ever won the contendor ship... i'd make sure to throw you off it
nah seen this concept already and it's weak anyways
so i'll finish wrecking this bitch, fuck rights, ima break the whore's neck
cause Cee'll get clubbed so fucking badly... i'll have PETA on my doorstep
this was straight, +4

vs.

kid ima stunner, I come with concepts, that’ll totally wreck ya
He acting all prepared for this battle…like he came in a stretcher
too simple though
Ya got nothing between da ears, of course im droppin u w/ ease
voters are only leaning towards You…cuz they enjoying da breeze
i dont even get this and dont think its good anyways
u aint on my level, only ppl w/ a fear of heights should battle u clown
cuz here punches can take Flight, w/ out ever leavin the fukin ground
this was aight +1, coulda worded it better tho
dude, im juz slappin u around, im not about to disappoint my crowd
Unless its Your funeral tomorrow……I aint letting No Body Down!
lol, this wad dope +2
Cats sayin this’ll be a tight match up, u gotta be shitting me Dudes?
Of Course he rolls with the punches, he rolled wen I kicked him too!
i like this, it's decent +3
im takin this serious man, I hope u didn think I was playin with you
So if I just killed off all ur Chances, im sorry…I was aiming for you
this was aight but i can't quote it
I always knew I was intimidating…but its a lot worst then it seemed
Cuz this dude fumbled a line, every time…I looked up at my screen
really wack
u shoulda taken this Chance, n tried to drop somethin really sick son
Cuz u was always going out on a limb…I just havnt decided which 1
plaaayeedd

Ramcees ur decent, but stop using played rhymes or simple rhymes, use more rhymes like that "funeral, not letting no body down" shit cuz when u start using clever wordplay like that, that's when u'll start winning all your matches

Flight, you did ya thing, but i feel sometimes u got sick concepts but then you dont word them into sick punches and it means nothing so i cant quote them, work on that and try and have set ups that are relevant to the next line not random stuff

so i got this 4-3 for Flight

v/flight