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Lay. 07-07-08 02:17 AM

Mauvais Loup ( 3 ) vs Adam ( 0 )
 
Mauvais Loup vs Adam

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Goodluck.

Mauvais Loup 07-07-08 09:08 PM

check g'luck

Adam 07-08-08 02:04 AM

Hello.

Adam 07-11-08 02:04 PM

Bah bah fuck face, have you any skill?

Shit, I wanted him to drop first to see if he had talent,
'Cause I checked his verse from last week and I never really found it.
Just strained my neck reading it, but that happens with herbs,
So if you see me coming at you sideways it's because I read your verse.

But hey, a new dawg vs. a vet, I think you know his fate,
And if this fag thinks he has my number, he'd try to call it for a date.
^ Ha! It's been awhile, but I'm still on higher ground,
So while I get used to my New Balance, you can watch me run Mauv down.
But really, fuck this clown, he's a nobody, a fake.
Pull the wool up from your eyes herb, your verses aren't that great.
At least this kid is safe, knows how to use his head,
Mauv doesn't rock just sheep skin, he rocks their whole ass hole instead.
But everything that starts must have an end, that ain't a lie,
So keep your chin up and when I Cum-Blo I'll try to miss your eye.


I'm rusty as hell, I sure hope you can beat that.

Mauvais Loup 07-11-08 03:56 PM

i don't have time for this, why is every league due on the same fuckin day?


we could square up, let's box, it don't matter what the location
but fucka bob 'n weave<---just describes ya sexual orientation
always chattin it up, a big talker, the only thing that's worse is...
...when i say "shoot the shit", i'm puttin holes through his verses
i'm burstin with curses, you gon' be thinking it's immersing hexes
but when this hermaphrodite contemplates...
.................................it brings new meaning to battle of the sexes
shit, you or kevin-c, i'm still takin a free win......don't confuse
but you? ha! hell, you gotta pay niggaz just so you won't lose
i've always heard of spring forward, but my punches flip him to the fall
i always throw my opponent through...
.........................................but since adhere, i'll just stick em to the wall
you gon' be famous? haha...that's some of the funniest shit i've heard
last time you were a one-namer........god had JUST created the Earth

Dickard. 07-11-08 04:12 PM

we could square up, let's box, it don't matter what the location
but fucka bob 'n weave<---just describes ya sexual orientation
shit, you or kevin-c, i'm still takin a free win......don't confuse
but you? ha! hell, you gotta pay niggaz just so you won't lose

vs.


But everything that starts must have an end, that ain't a lie,
So keep your chin up and when I Cum-Blo I'll try to miss your eye.



really a one sided battle...adam ur verse was cheesy and not what im used to seein from you. Mauv ur verse was iight had better attempt at punches and more creative in my eye. dece battle.

v/mauv

Adam 07-12-08 10:57 AM

Weak at dropping the sheep sig after I threw two punches about it, but whatever works for you, I don't really care.

King Solo 07-12-08 12:16 PM

Wow @ how long I've been away from this site.. but I see dudes still have a strange way of voting.

This battle wasn't great at all, but I have to say that Adam took this battle pretty easily. Mauv had some ok concepts that could've been flipped nicely - his wording let the punches down though. The bob & weave line was ok, shoot the shit line was far too basic to have any real power, battle of the sexes line was kinda eehhh.. pay niggaz to not lose was gay unless it was a true personal, which I highly doubt it was, adhere line had some cool wordplay and then the closer would've been good if it wasn't played to fuck. Adam on the other hand.. his opener sucked major ass, sorry bro but that was on some noob shit. The second bar was a bit better, but still far too basic for my tastes.. the number/date punch was funny, the new balance line was pretty cool, the next punch was weak again, the rock the sheeps clothing/ass hole line was disgusting but it had me laughing and the closer was pretty nice. So overall I thought Adam had a more polished verse, both had ups and downs but Adam got it on consistency.

And don't question my vote nuccaz, I have worldly knowledge of battles now that I have toured and participated in practically every decent league going on the internet.

Vote: Adam

Adam 07-12-08 03:57 PM

Word, thanks for voting. I didn't think people would get the shoe wordplay, it's been a long time since I've done this shit, I'm hoping to be half decent by my third week.

Kirk 07-12-08 05:18 PM

we could square up, let's box, it don't matter what the location
but fucka bob 'n weave<---just describes ya sexual orientation
^No, that was weak. Had potential though.

always chattin it up, a big talker, the only thing that's worse is...
...when i say "shoot the shit", i'm puttin holes through his verses
^No.

i'm burstin with curses, you gon' be thinking it's immersing hexes
but when this hermaphrodite contemplates...
.................................it brings new meaning to battle of the sexes
^Worded badly but alright.

shit, you or kevin-c, i'm still takin a free win......don't confuse
but you? ha! hell, you gotta pay niggaz just so you won't lose
^No.

i've always heard of spring forward, but my punches flip him to the fall
i always throw my opponent through...
.........................................but since adhere, i'll just stick em to the wall
^No.

you gon' be famous? haha...that's some of the funniest shit i've heard
last time you were a one-namer........god had JUST created the Earth
^Alright closer.

Shit, I wanted him to drop first to see if he had talent,
'Cause I checked his verse from last week and I never really found it.
^Nah.

Just strained my neck reading it, but that happens with herbs,
So if you see me coming at you sideways it's because I read your verse.
^Nah.

But hey, a new dawg vs. a vet, I think you know his fate,
And if this fag thinks he has my number, he'd try to call it for a date.
^Alright.

^ Ha! It's been awhile, but I'm still on higher ground,
So while I get used to my New Balance, you can watch me run Mauv down.
^Haha. Old school.

But really, fuck this clown, he's a nobody, a fake.
Pull the wool up from your eyes herb, your verses aren't that great.
^Alright.

At least this kid is safe, knows how to use his head,
Mauv doesn't rock just sheep skin, he rocks their whole ass hole instead.
^Lmao. That was gross.

But everything that starts must have an end, that ain't a lie,
So keep your chin up and when I Cum-Blo I'll try to miss your eye.
^Haha. Alright.

Not a very good battle at all. Both verses were kinda lousy, but Adam stretched his punches a little bit further. Alot of the punches had potential but were worded reaaaallly bad. So I'm gonna give this battle to Adam due to his humor and harder hitting punches.

Lay. 07-14-08 01:19 AM

Adam wins 2 votes to 0.

Adam ( 3 ) and Mauvais Loup ( 2 ) - and signed out by request.


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