Minor Fuck Up on this thread. Shit got deleted. Both battlers punches
are in this 1st post. Thank You

K.stubbs 1

dudes seriously goin soft on me, why tha fuck u 'crackin' up kid?
Coke Dealer....? your crack didn't even come back with nothin

Coke Dealer 2
Stubb's bitch worthy, had to be whored by a dealer just to get a league
Too bad the model he used to be successful, was made 6 months ago by me
N we both know you gonna get pissy after this drop i spit
But than again Kay's so bitch made he's always followed by his period

K.Stubbs 1

You aignt top notch kid, i asked for suggestions from everyone
And dont you think...
.......'its a rap' was enough for you to think of a better one?

dudes seriously goin soft on me, why tha fuck u 'crackin' up kid?
Coke Dealer....? your crack didn't even come back with nothin

kind of weak

Stubb's bitch worthy, had to be whored by a dealer just to get a league
Too bad the model he used to be successful, was made 6 months ago by me
^^personal. not too hard but personal
N we both know you gonna get pissy after this drop i spit
But than again Kay's so bitch made he's always followed by his period
^^i've seen period punchlines used on peoples username before. not original.. and it didnt rhyme

You aignt top notch kid, i asked for suggestions from everyone
And dont you think...
.......'its a rap' was enough for you to think of a better one?
^^decent.

this is kinda hard to decide.. honestly battle wasnt very good.. ima say stubbs edged this cuz dealer's second bar didnt really rhyme and stubbs best was better then his best.

v/ k stubbs

\/=stubs close battle,,, not much innit tho,,, and if you rymed period woulda been alot better

maybe period and drop i spit are just the way i say them...cuz they rhyme to me, but eh, s'all good

uppin

Coke Dealer:
Stubb's bitch worthy, had to be whored by a dealer just to get a league
Too bad the model he used to be successful, was made 6 months ago by me
this was a descent bar.. seen the concept before though


N we both know you gonna get pissy after this drop i spit
But than again Kay's so bitch made he's always followed by his period
Nice flip on an older concept



K. Stubbs
dudes seriously goin soft on me, why tha fuck u 'crackin' up kid?
Coke Dealer....? your crack didn't even come back with nothin
Nice hit on the name...original punch


You aignt top notch kid, i asked for suggestions from everyone
And dont you think...
.......'its a rap' was enough for you to think of a better one?
This was another cool punch here



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I believe that K. Stubbs had more originality in his punches and they hit a bit harder because they seemed to be more direct that Coke Dealers.


Vote - K. Stubbs

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yaaayyy

uppin,

nice to see some votes in already.
Appreciate it everyone

stubbs 1st was ok personal but a little weak 2nd was pretty decent

othe dude was weak didn't feel them didn't really get the first personal


vote/ K


V/ Dq'd Inadequate Feed

K.Stubbs

Why did stuff get deleted? This is the quote for my punch



*Fixed

K.Stubbs

dudes seriously goin soft on me, why tha fuck u 'crackin' up kid?
Coke Dealer....? your crack didn't even come back with nothin
crack wordplay but its correlation fails... mediocre @ best

Stubb's bitch worthy, had to be whored by a dealer just to get a league
Too bad the model he used to be successful, was made 6 months ago by me
^ok.. basing his success on your creation. not 2 hard
N we both know you gonna get pissy after this drop i spit
But than again Kay's so bitch made he's always followed by his period
period punches are played, comedians do em better than that

You aignt top notch kid, i asked for suggestions from everyone
And dont you think...
.......'its a rap' was enough for you to think of a better one?
no correlation here either.

in the end both of you were lame and old with your lines so I have to go on wording STRICTLY... nothing else matters here, just who came at the other's throat the most in my opinion

so let's see here.. (rhyming isn't a big deal unless you rhyme big deal with big deal, etc.)

that shit's pretty much dead even too

damn i wanna slap you both

further punch analysis :thumbup:

Aphil's first personal punch vs. K.stubb's second punch is the battle here, and if I look at it, they are both talking about the same thing, so "think about a better one" could be referring to both coke's punch or his league creation. in other words, it kinda douses out the flame within coke's punch


so as lame as it may be to you coke dealer, voting on this was also lame, and in the end I'll have to go with kris.

=/ 1

^^^ hate vote/crew vote

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lol

v/ - Coke Dealer


stubbs first punch was basic as hell and weak as hell. and the second punch I don't even think you can call a punch either. it read really simple and comes off as more of a statement than a punch.

coke had a weak ass first punch. the concept was there and it holds true from the 1-2-1 shit he ran on itzarap. still though, poor wording and a severe lack of creativity prevented it from being anything special. his second punch was another punch killed by poor wording. what the fuck these douchebag voters are on I don't know because when you read the punch smoothly and stop trying to analyse it.. then it does rhyme. the problem is most dudes on here will tell you it doesn't rhyme unless the words look almost identical.


so yeah, coke won this by throwing punches as opposed to making statements. sorry i don't chain vote like the rest of you.

^things got deleted. You missed his link, the site he is referrin to
is called its a wrap.com or some shit.

but yeah, i agree overall. I didn't like my bars either. weak.
appreciate the feed. one

he knows what he's talkin bout, becuase he was in the league i ran

and it was called ..itz a rap

K.Stubbs 1

You aignt top notch kid, i asked for suggestions from everyone
And dont you think...
.......'its a rap' was enough for you to think of a better one?
..
..
only one that was decent i thought, u talkin bout the website right

v- stubs