Week 2: Crossfire (0-0) .vs LPMNDCTE (0-0) --Ready For Votes--
 

his court room antics full of lies...he's down with snitchin, for sure
for CF to plead the 'Fifth'...he'll have to take it out his lips some more
you still with wifey, you know that slut you date is full of lie & sin
her politics are dirty as usually....its hard to see you say good Biden

Me Snitch?This Kids The Definition of A Gerbil+me dirty?daz only gna get me mo girls,,tru?
Time 2 get a pad Nerd In Thiz Rapverse Ima leav ya Ass murkd,,u Lack words no1 heard u
Back Ontrack Gerbil ya Words Spew,,if this were audio Id jus say close ya fukn mouth foo
Politics isa clowns move,,allrdy Fukt wishn u cud duck,,N lies?Wen i Fire,,itz all bout truth

dude, crossfire. that multi uages does not work out for you, you gotta shorten up your lines. and concentrate harder on your wordplay. Dont try and put so much into every punch.


LP-your bars weren't great. You had some ok attempts, but nothin came in the end. Your lines fell off, with what was original bein said in your set ups..

v/LP, only cuz his bars were readable, and not all mumbled together with forced wordplay

LP: I didn't really feel them, they were weak I understand them but wording makes it hard too.

cross: I didn't see a punch in there, your concentrating on ryhming and flow in a punchline battle league, you should try more on shorter lines with a direct punch or personal, the first line should be a set up to your second meaning they should both tie into each other in relation. and the second line is your punch thats the main line that people look at to determine a winner. Of course multis and wordplay and other effects help make it stand out to the reader, but at the end of the day the punch decides the vote. No disrespect dude

vote: LP

Crossfire you can tell that your not very good at texting, step your game up and learn how to struture a punch with a personal or even some decent wordplay

LP i thought your shit was pretty weak, badly projected as far as the personals' and just the overal image of what it is that you were saying, but it was better than Crossfires


vote: LP

his court room antics full of lies...he's down with snitchin, for sure
for CF to plead the 'Fifth'...he'll have to take it out his lips some more
There is no correlation here lmfao
you still with wifey, you know that slut you date is full of lie & sin
her politics are dirty as usually....its hard to see you say good Biden
almost misused but you'll get a less than ok (girlfriend jokes... pff)


Me Snitch?This Kids The Definition of A Gerbil+me dirty?daz only gna get me mo girls,,tru?
Time 2 get a pad Nerd In Thiz Rapverse Ima leav ya Ass murkd,,u Lack words no1 heard u
lame
Back Ontrack Gerbil ya Words Spew,,if this were audio Id jus say close ya fukn mouth foo
Politics isa clowns move,,allrdy Fukt wishn u cud duck,,N lies?Wen i Fire,,itz all bout truth
lame

v/ LPMNDCTE

his court room antics full of lies...he's down with snitchin, for sure
for CF to plead the 'Fifth'...he'll have to take it out his lips some more
..
so you're saying he likes to drink? not that mean or hard hitting, good wordplay, but lame wording
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you still with wifey, you know that slut you date is full of lie & sin
her politics are dirty as usually....its hard to see you say good Biden
^^and now you're saying he doesn't break up with girls when they are sluts, again good wordplay but really lame wording, makes it not hit hard.

vs.
cossfire you suck. your shit isn't not only not fun to read but its hard to read cuz u hardly are speaking english. why type like an asshole like that, shits dumb

vote- LP

5-0

LP wins 1-0
Cross loses 0-1