Week 3: Coke Dealer (2-1) .vs Mardu Entite (1-1)
 

checkin in, g/l

vice versa


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Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence

wow, aphilly chess steak line...and a gay joke, orignal


Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
meh wordplay but not too hard hitting

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
1st was weak and worded weired, 2nd weak again old concept

Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
meh not really feeling it

vote coke dealer for a little stronger lines.

1-0

bump bump

.......eh i didn't like none of these. honestly, Mardu you didn't have bad concepts man
but i dont think you worded them right. maybe it was the multi usage you were trying, but it didn't fit. the 1st bar wasn't really affected too much by it, but the harshness in ya 1st bar was weak...then in ya 2nd bar, the multi usage fucked it all up...and the bar was wack...


then...coke, ha! this by far the worst thing i've seen you drop yet. Your 1st bar was nicely worded. and the punch was there. just kind of weak. and your 2nd bar was just wack. sorry. i've seen you drop way better...i dont know man.

both really off this weak. not sure what happened.

v.coke barely

eh, thanks for the honest feed

2-0

uppin

Watch me kill this 'fruit', home boy is such a fuckin sqaure
That when i write MC, Entite always seems to diss a pear
no correlation...

Base the money on the outcome while im season the plate
Leave'n A philly ate especially when the cheese is at steak
lol, almost ok
Would lock this coke dealer up..its annoying but tempt'n
But he's a faggot in prison....the only one enjoy'n his sentence
no

Abused as a child, i this a whorish lady...aint no dude
See why you a signle no name!! cuz this Ma's Rud(e)
this failed on many levels. Even if you were working with a concept, the connection also failed because of its further failing attempt with no connection.

call me a hater but, v/ Mardu Entite

rofl @ saying a phily cheese steak line was fresh

dude that line has been PLAYED EVERY which way you could possibly imagine, i'm suprised that 2v was the one who dropped THAT VOTE

rofl

2-1

^quit freepostin fucker. its just a vote. :rolleyes:

i'm not freeposting, i was uppin my battle, but jesus christ...a philly cheese steak line

come on son, come on.

^uppin your battle? Its the ONLY one ready for votes lol, and its @ the top already
just like everyone told TO, its just one persons opinion. let it ride dog, yours werent good either