Week 4: Coke Dealer (3-1) .vs JTR (2-1)
 

Nike .

i know everyone KNOWS you have a g/f that lives in cali, and you date online, but some of the guys from r/b woulnd't get my punch, unless i explained it out a lil bit


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244326

recyclin lines...^^ silly JTR

I'm set, you old tech, this kid recycle lines like tape cassestes
N i'm no player, but atelast i can get bitches OFF the internet

your long ass intro was as boring as ya rhyme scheme hahaha

I'm single dummy, but your bitch big as a beast, get that a leash...
With thick abs & cheeks & a lifestyle that's as active as the pic battle league
Feel bad for this kid, I can do the math and add up his wit, it's lackin a bit
Plus he's married to a fat ass ho and for those facts I feel bad for his kid

might be long, but atleast its true

I'mma 'rock' dude like Alcatraz, my girl fat? Jew That Raps is sooo mean
But atleast i can actually FUCK my g/f, not masturbate to my computer screen

get off my dick, nerd.

I'm set, you old tech, this kid recycle lines like tape cassestes
N i'm no player, but atelast i can get bitches OFF the internet
kinda weakwasn't feeling it wording was pretty basic too, nothing stood out in this line


I'm single dummy, but your bitch big as a beast, get that a leash...
With thick abs & cheeks & a lifestyle that's as active as the pic battle league
weak and indirect
Feel bad for this kid, I can do the math and add up his wit, it's lackin a bit
Plus he's married to a fat ass ho and for those facts I feel bad for his kid
weak again, 1st line its like your caling him fat and lazy but the pics I saw of him he wasn't fat, and teh last punch you say his girls is fat, just not hard now adays especially if its not true


I'mma 'rock' dude like Alcatraz, my girl fat? Jew That Raps is sooo mean
But atleast i can actually FUCK my g/f, not masturbate to my computer screen
hmm same concept as before but a little better still weak direct and at him though



vote coke for personals and more effective lines

coke dealer-Much more personal and nice job on the research..

jtr- You flowed nice but it was simple and for people to be hit hard it has to be true.

So i would give this to coke dealer.

I'm set, you old tech, this kid recycle lines like tape cassestes
N i'm no player, but atelast i can get bitches OFF the internet
Eh, i dont know what was up with the wording on this. But
i wasn't really feeling this @ all. Didnt rhyme well, and concept
was ok. but just didnt like

I'm single dummy, but your bitch big as a beast, get that a leash...
With thick abs & cheeks & a lifestyle that's as active as the pic battle league
indirect...really has nothing to do with him. Weak
Feel bad for this kid, I can do the math and add up his wit, it's lackin a bit
Plus he's married to a fat ass ho and for those facts I feel bad for his kid
Fake personal...not really known to be true. no one can prove it, i dont know
whats up with these 2 from you this week. this isnt usually your style. you dont drop shit like this. eh, weak again


I'mma 'rock' dude like Alcatraz, my girl fat? Jew That Raps is sooo mean
But atleast i can actually FUCK my g/f, not masturbate to my computer screen
Eh, dont like masturbate lines....not really harsh



really i thought JTR would win this with flyin colors...but just failed to drop
anything good.

v/coke

Coke Dealer
I'm set, you old tech, this kid recycle lines like tape cassestes
N i'm no player, but atelast i can get bitches OFF the internet
You did too much digging on this punch to drop it so basic. It was alright and hit half ass, but it could have been a lot more effective than it was.
I'mma 'rock' dude like Alcatraz, my girl fat? Jew That Raps is sooo mean
But atleast i can actually FUCK my g/f, not masturbate to my computer screen
This was alright, it hit him pretty good. Would have been nice to see you incorporate more with the Rock/Alcatraz shit, but it's all good.

JTR
I'm single dummy, but your bitch big as a beast, get that a leash...
With thick abs & cheeks & a lifestyle that's as active as the pic battle league
These disses have been used before bro, It would have been key to use on Sobe. or something, but against Coke I think you could have used the concept way better.
Feel bad for this kid, I can do the math and add up his wit, it's lackin a bit
Plus he's married to a fat ass ho and for those facts I feel bad for his kid
This didn't really hit home too hard mate, I feel like you were going for multis this week bro and it just didn't really come across effective. Not sure if you underestimated Coke or what's up, but you usually drop way harder.

Vote: I gotta go with Coke Dealer on this one, his second punch was the only one that really hit in my opinion.

I vote Josh for not dropping a long ass, boring intro and using it ineffectively.

Hate me Coke, I know you want to.

i'd expect that from someone who didn't know what a punch was


but, eh, go figure

I know, but that's how I roll son. That's how I roll.

NAKED ON A FROSTY NIGHT WITH A NIPPLE ERECTION!! THAT'S HOW I ROLL!

no.....you roll, in circles


silly goose

no, I spin in circles.

but I roll in whatever direction I choose.. most often downhill.

what if the hill is upside down!