Week 5: Gkillaz (0-0) .vs Megatypezraw (0-0)
 

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checkk... goodluck my friend.

Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken

You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!
Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!

Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....

Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken
I don't see the correlation between gay and talent enough. In other words this was worded badly..

You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!
oh ok. sucky punch
Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!
what?

Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....
meh-ok. somewhere around thur

v/ gkillaz

Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken
very weak


You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!
stretched lines and weak also
Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!
weak again


Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....
weak again



its like you guys are old school, just random disses we need to see wordplay and other sick writing techniques.


vote g for the better structure

meh, i just keyed this in a matter of 3 minutes. prolly gonna sign out next week cus i think i got to many leagues on my plate. sorry guys.

Vote g everyone explained it already but it wasn't a bad battle or nothin it was jus kinda weak all around.
Vote/G Killaz

Killaz took this, but not by much

Mega, try and shorten your bars and make them more direct, your just pushing to much shit into one bar...when really you need to just make DIRECT punches...they hit alot harder

keep at it and you'll both get better

peace

Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken
^ehhh, no
Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....
^ could've hit a lot harsher..

vs

You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!
^decent concept, very stretched...
Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!
^no

both had a 2 very wack lines and 2 moderately wack lines
v/Gkilla

You aint a gangster friend, quit your act n all the pretends, I saw right through you quick,
Cus hes the only gent that tried to go G, but this aint the reverse of that MTV show slick!!

This was a bit wordly, but still managed to connect. gOOD concept


Killaz doesn’t bust gats he throws toasters, trying to act like hes fuckin wild,
Iunno whats worse that wack ass punch line or the fact he KNOWs the homo poster child!!

This was wak... straight up...



Mega couldnt drop shit even if he was usin' preparation h....
Your style is so stale like it has a bad expiration date....

This was barely descent. Rhymed well, but the concept was not strong enough

Your rhyme scheme im breakin' you seem like a Jafakin'
Megaz making' gay punch lines talented like Clay Aiken

to many similies in this bar. try to limit it to one. other than that, this was a cool bar


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Vote = GKillaz05

gillaz wins 1-0

mega losts 0-1