Pre Tourney Matchups: LP .vs Wordz Ah God
 

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the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show
your claim you good...and think your not related to bitches
even if you and wack aren't distant cousins I still see the family resemblence
I pass slow fuckers...and your career is equivalent to your health
so 'catch me if you can'...you gave up & asked Leornardo Dicaprio for help
cuz I dominate Tourney matches, dont not come with the same old vibe
you need to come so new...that a security device is enclosed inside

o shit. this is ready for votes, cool. uppin so everyone knows

the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show


.vs.


Who the fuck r u?
Hiding in my shadows but Im beating ur wak frame..
coz last time he crossed Wordz.. he ended up with THAT name.
My uppercuts = Jesus..Christ this kids is dope???
Please, I'll hit u with enough crosses..
..to put an end to ur corny religeouse jokes.



Overall, i guess this battle wasnt bad. By all means it wasn't good. but it was enjoyable. I thought both of you had gooood openers, but other than that ya verses
were just meh to me. Both need to work on wording alot. umm..lp you've got concepts man. i can see it in ya lines, you just got to work on your set ups continueing to follow through with ya ending bar. (like u did in ya opener) words, the one thing i can say about yours..is it seemed kind of choppy. work on ya structure just a bit, not too much. cuz it isn't too bad. but def, can use some work. other than that props to both u guys. u gave us a good pre tourney matchup. And that IS all this is, so i understand not droppin ya hardest. But again props

v. wordz

the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show
this was ok, concept was pretty dope you just worded it bad so it didn't hit that hard
your claim you good...and think your not related to bitches
even if you and wack aren't distant cousins I still see the family resemblence
meh agin wording takes away from the effect, wasn't feeling it
I pass slow fuckers...and your career is equivalent to your health
so 'catch me if you can'...you gave up & asked Leornardo Dicaprio for help
again weak wordplay with little effect
cuz I dominate Tourney matches, dont not come with the same old vibe
you need to come so new...that a security device is enclosed inside
same thing

you getting it I guess but you have to work on wording and delivery, polish it up so it sound snappy and hard. Your working off creative concept just not putting them together well.


Who the fuck r u?
Hiding in my shadows but Im beating ur wak frame..
coz last time he crossed Wordz.. he ended up with THAT name.
kinda generic and simple but still delivered well enough to hit
Ur style is trash but I understand ur no fire
while I drop wak on purpose..
..to make people think Im battling my ghostwriter.
concept is played, wording was bad too
My uppercuts = Jesus..Christ this kids is dope???
Please, I'll hit u with enough crosses..
..to put an end to ur corny religeouse jokes.
seems like fillerish, due didn't have any religiouse punches cept the first I guess, but it was nothing about jesus
Speaking of that, ur dying..
'coz AhGod'll smash u into so many fuckin pieces
They'll be serving ur ass at mass with wine.
hmm then you use a religous line, I liked it after I read it a few times, the communion is small and there are a lot of them and it is also supposed to be jesus, gods son.......so yea, nice


Ima give it to wordz for the better punches, not nessesarily he better concepts but it shows how wording and delivery are effective and important

peace

LP:
the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show
4.5/10 - ok opener.
your claim you good...and think your not related to bitches
even if you and wack aren't distant cousins I still see the family resemblence
3/10 - meh.
I pass slow fuckers...and your career is equivalent to your health
so 'catch me if you can'...you gave up & asked Leornardo Dicaprio for help
5/10 - good punch.
cuz I dominate Tourney matches, dont not come with the same old vibe
you need to come so new...that a security device is enclosed inside
5/10 - good closer.
17.5/40
good verse, flowed pretty well... and had some pretty decent punches.


Wordz:
Who the fuck r u?
Hiding in my shadows but Im beating ur wak frame..
coz last time he crossed Wordz.. he ended up with THAT name.
7/10 - best line i seen in this tourney yet.
Ur style is trash but I understand ur no fire
while I drop wak on purpose..
..to make people think Im battling my ghostwriter.
4/10 - decent.
My uppercuts = Jesus..Christ this kids is dope???
Please, I'll hit u with enough crosses..
..to put an end to ur corny religeouse jokes.
3/10 ... meh
Speaking of that, ur dying..
'coz AhGod'll smash u into so many fuckin pieces
They'll be serving ur ass at mass with wine.
4/10 - decnt closer...
18/40
good verse man, havnt seen nothin from you in a minute, but i see you still got it.. hope we meet up in this dude :)

Good battle right here but I have to give my vote to wordz for that opener was a siick personal... he had some good punches too.. LP you had a good verse to no hate just think wordz got ya by that much.

Vote - GODZZZZZ

word, thanks G. Glad to see you remember me but I'll really break shit in depending on my seating next week.

of course I remember you buddy we both been here since 04' ... well niice win here anywayz and i'll see ya when i see ya

LP-


the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show

-okay

your claim you good...and think your not related to bitches
even if you and wack aren't distant cousins I still see the family resemblence

-eh, choppy n kinda weak

I pass slow fuckers...and your career is equivalent to your health
so 'catch me if you can'...you gave up & asked Leornardo Dicaprio for help

-okay

cuz I dominate Tourney matches, dont not come with the same old vibe
you need to come so new...that a security device is enclosed inside

-ehh


wordz-

Hiding in my shadows but Im beating ur wak frame..
coz last time he crossed Wordz.. he ended up with THAT name.

-lol kool

Ur style is trash but I understand ur no fire
while I drop wak on purpose..
..to make people think Im battling my ghostwriter.

-no

My uppercuts = Jesus..Christ this kids is dope???
Please, I'll hit u with enough crosses..
..to put an end to ur corny religeouse jokes.

-ehh

Speaking of that, ur dying..
'coz AhGod'll smash u into so many fuckin pieces
They'll be serving ur ass at mass with wine.

okay

-ehh, tuff one to judge 2 decent bars on both ends, but im gonna give it to words for having the best bar of the battle.


vote - words.

ohshit

i don't wanna break it down
or vote

i just wanted to say ohshit

the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show

Good attempt, poor execution with wording

Vs

Hiding in my shadows but Im beating ur wak frame..
coz last time he crossed Wordz.. he ended up with THAT name.

Lol ^ that was a cool name play.


Close, but Vote - Wordz

the Words Ah God sound greek to me, I'm crushin this geek with blows
if u n Zeus play God...than Mt. Olympus must be part of the broadway show
bad wording ok concept

.vs.


Who the fuck r u?
Hiding in my shadows but Im beating ur wak frame..
coz last time he crossed Wordz.. he ended up with THAT name.
good
My uppercuts = Jesus..Christ this kids is dope???
Please, I'll hit u with enough crosses..
..to put an end to ur corny religeouse jokes.
ok



vote wordz for a better verse. LP needs to elevate.

lol...........


nice job wordz

Wordz RUNS with the win 6-0

LP loses, good job though both u guys