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Jonathon -c- .vs MegaTypezRaw -c-
____________________ Battles set every Sunday Verses Due Thursday Midnight (ET) Voting closed Saturday Midnight (ET) Line Limit- Min 8 lines, Max 16 lines _____________________ |
check. how many would u like to go? also no feeding will be allowed. kool?
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whatever you want
match whoever drops first.. & no, no feeding.. its part of the rules |
so is 16 max. i have another 16 line battle at another site. im lookin to go 12ish.
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i must be baby lotion if MegaTypezRaw, i'ma keep it smooth
after I put some heat in this battle i'll put this raw meat to use... your flame just ain't the same, u hobo wit no teeth ... the bright side is... u'll have to use holey socks on hand after I defeat... my punches are direct, straight shots in the eye'll leave'M hopeless cuz the way i'm throwin nutshots you'd think his mouth would open you gay prick, your not shit... so stay the fuck out my toilet i'd place my seed to your mouth - but your fruityness'd prolly spoil it. you must be short because you're NOT getting the upperhand & if writing is your occupation its clearly garbageman im the type of holiday that'd put mega to bed no homo - he'd like that cuz he the type that gets raped and jail & don't fight back... Quote:
don't even need this battle, M, other ppl'd make fun of me... cuz I didn't even try in the preseason & your STILL ranked under me look kid, i'ma dilenquent, the back of your face'll catch a strong knee A B, how the fuck you gettin' thru this when you're hardly able to C |
Here you finish in last place cus everytime you spit Jons left with a bad taste,
J brings ‘words to life’ but homie the world is already filled with enough waste. You wanna be gangster? Well then pack heat n you’ll still have no hope, Because I’ll let you hang in the hood, when I replace my sweatshirt with the rope. How could you claim to be dope? When everyone on this site say your lame bro, On stage I don’t even have to throw punches, he has to try to dodge the tomatoes. It’s like im out to hunt down the wackiness n Jons defiantly manageable, If I told this retard to ‘to get on top of my game’ he’d go n fuck animals. You dont stand a chance to win for real, Jons got a boring mind, That’s exactly why Megas gonna cause sudden death without forcing Overtime. And he thought about killing himself it’s a fact knownin megas not a man to be testin, So go ahead an ‘Jump’ because we BOTH know next week youll be in that section. I just straight keyd this cus moron wasnt worth it. Civil next time gemme a don, Cus first week I had to destroy newb Fly-E nd now you made me take a shit on the jon. Plus wtf kinda name is that? Your mother wants to you to commit a fatality, I think she picked the lamest name in the book...to fit his personality. |
A 20 line quote in the middle of your verse?
i must be baby lotion if MegaTypezRaw, i'ma keep it smooth after I put some heat in this battle i'll put this raw meat to use... don't see it as wordplay, well not good use of it anyway, came across weak your flame just ain't the same, u hobo wit no teeth ... the bright side is... u'll have to use holey socks on hand after I defeat... lame, and defeat line has been done my punches are direct, straight shots in the eye'll leave'M hopeless cuz the way i'm throwin nutshots you'd think his mouth would open weak and generic you gay prick, your not shit... so stay the fuck out my toilet i'd place my seed to your mouth - but your fruityness'd prolly spoil it. again lame you must be short because you're NOT getting the upperhand & if writing is your occupation its clearly garbageman worded bad im the type of holiday that'd put mega to bed no homo - he'd like that cuz he the type that gets raped and jail & don't fight back... really gay and generic don't even need this battle, M, other ppl'd make fun of me... cuz I didn't even try in the preseason & your STILL ranked under me wewak execution look kid, i'ma dilenquent, the back of your face'll catch a strong knee A B, how the fuck you gettin' thru this when you're hardly able to C weak nothign big mostly played generic copncept, but you didn't really even have the wroding to maek them anything. making the text smaller wont help the fact the lines are stretched. Here you finish in last place cus everytime you spit Jons left with a bad taste, J brings ‘words to life’ but homie the world is already filled with enough waste. I dont know You wanna be gangster? Well then pack heat n you’ll still have no hope, Because I’ll let you hang in the hood, when I replace my sweatshirt with the rope. concept was ok but delivery was weak How could you claim to be dope? When everyone on this site say your lame bro, On stage I don’t even have to throw punches, he has to try to dodge the tomatoes. weak It’s like im out to hunt down the wackiness n Jons defiantly manageable, If I told this retard to ‘to get on top of my game’ he’d go n fuck animals. weal again, could have did something with the concept though] You dont stand a chance to win for real, Jons got a boring mind, That’s exactly why Megas gonna cause sudden death without forcing Overtime. weak And he thought about killing himself it’s a fact knownin megas not a man to be testin, So go ahead an ‘Jump’ because we BOTH know next week youll be in that section. I was expecting a punch like this this week, Ididn't like it I just straight keyd this cus moron wasnt worth it. Civil next time gemme a don, Cus first week I had to destroy newb Fly-E nd now you made me take a shit on the jon. weak and stretched Plus wtf kinda name is that? Your mother wants to you to commit a fatality, I think she picked the lamest name in the book...to fit his personality. weak you guys both came pretty weak, guna say mega for better by a bit |
^sorry, i prolly shoulda mentioned it in my in my first bar but his locatoin says "Word life = Poetry... bringing words to life."
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I know, just wasn't really sure how I felt about it, like a so so
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oh, ok. sorry oneway, for coming weak.
my main goal was to please you. |
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both of you definately made a huuuge improvement from last week. I see alot of potential in both of you. You both had fresh concepts, just need to work a little bit on wording them properly. to make them more affective. Keep it up' u only going uphill from here. i got jon on this one....although i think mega had the best punch of the battle. Jon was a little more consistent with attempts. and just had one more quoteable. |
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as a voter it should have and it didn't |
i must be baby lotion if MegaTypezRaw, i'ma keep it smooth
after I put some heat in this battle i'll put this raw meat to use... 3/10 - very weak opener. your flame just ain't the same, u hobo wit no teeth ... the bright side is... u'll have to use holey socks on hand after I defeat... 1.5/10 - horrible. (so many defeat lines, ill never like em) my punches are direct, straight shots in the eye'll leave'M hopeless cuz the way i'm throwin nutshots you'd think his mouth would open 3/10 - kinda gay. you gay prick, your not shit... so stay the fuck out my toilet i'd place my seed to your mouth - but your fruityness'd prolly spoil it. 3/10 - nah you must be short because you're NOT getting the upperhand & if writing is your occupation its clearly garbageman 5/10 - best punch yet. im the type of holiday that'd put mega to bed no homo - he'd like that cuz he the type that gets raped and jail & don't fight back... 0/10 - WTF?? rhymed well I guess... but this is just wow don't even need this battle, M, other ppl'd make fun of me... cuz I didn't even try in the preseason & your STILL ranked under me 5/10 - ok personal I guess. look kid, i'ma dilenquent, the back of your face'll catch a strong knee A B, how the fuck you gettin' thru this when you're hardly able to C 4.5/10 - alright. 25/80 this was a pretty weak verse, had a few pretty decent shots in there.. but nothin' that really stood out. Here you finish in last place cus everytime you spit Jons left with a bad taste, J brings ‘words to life’ but homie the world is already filled with enough waste. 5/10 - decent opener. You wanna be gangster? Well then pack heat n you’ll still have no hope, Because I’ll let you hang in the hood, when I replace my sweatshirt with the rope. 3.5/10 - meh. How could you claim to be dope? When everyone on this site say your lame bro, On stage I don’t even have to throw punches, he has to try to dodge the tomatoes. 4/10 - kinda made me chuckle. It’s like im out to hunt down the wackiness n Jons defiantly manageable, If I told this retard to ‘to get on top of my game’ he’d go n fuck animals. 4/10 - iight. You dont stand a chance to win for real, Jons got a boring mind, That’s exactly why Megas gonna cause sudden death without forcing Overtime. 6.5/10 - niice. And he thought about killing himself it’s a fact knownin megas not a man to be testin, So go ahead an ‘Jump’ because we BOTH know next week youll be in that section. 5/10 - iight. I just straight keyd this cus moron wasnt worth it. Civil next time gemme a don, Cus first week I had to destroy newb Fly-E nd now you made me take a shit on the jon. 7/10 - lmao .. this won this battle hands down. i just liked it. Plus wtf kinda name is that? Your mother wants to you to commit a fatality, I think she picked the lamest name in the book...to fit his personality. 4.5/10 - not the hottest closer. 39.5/80 this was def. surprising for me.. I never really seen much from you.. and didnt think of you as a top contender until I read this verse. like there was some weak points but i havnt chuckled in a verse in the longest time... good verse homie. Vote-MRT |
thanks for sharing.
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id place my seed in ur mouth but your fruityness i'll spoil it...lol wtf?please clarify
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