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Civil. 03-02-09 07:08 PM

Alphabetized 1-0 .vs Final 1-0
 
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Final. 03-02-09 07:15 PM

yep.

we should probably go 16.

Alphabetized 03-02-09 07:52 PM

check .

GKillaz05 03-02-09 09:42 PM

no one on the courner has swager like these tough guys

Alphabetized 03-05-09 05:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
no one on the courner has swager like these tough guys


Hmm.. Really?

Searching... Searching... oh yeah..... Final.


Im not an expert, but you've lost 2 a ton of heads as of recent
Analyst of those people would consist of anyone halfway decent
Final I MADE you dog, and ya NOT smart ya just bad, hoe
but your deffenetly bright...
...since ya spent ya career in my shadow
I'm glad though, cuz wit ya bitch i dont force shit, I jus clap
So don't get mad at ME dude, harassment to land on my lap
Schoolin this herb, Im scared<-- but only just to give ya hope
Cuz the only kids that be FEARIN final..
.. are the dudes who lost their notes
Why even go 16 dude, cut ya verses down they wack as fuck
Cuz as soon as I saw 16 I was shorten of them would suck
& you aint champin this dude, need proof? I'll rock ya brain
Cuz we'll see Final in the champ match...
but thats only the topics name


12.

Final. 03-05-09 07:07 PM

he's tight to be around. i'm the type to try to know him
cus i get a rise outta alpha.. in the ranks when i KO him :]
you're the retard type that thinks preperation is the best
but your bowels will be evacuating when my gun's Fire Drills your chest
homies gay, and you're girl? somebody should warn her..
his beds experienced more Man Coverage then shutdown corners
really though, alpha you're fat. i got you're girl in my rig
& me and her made clips with enough X's to even fit YOU too big
im sick of this kid. i'ma let him get hit with the fire
cus Al's so weird, Mr. yankovic was forced to retire
i'm nice with my hands man, so i'll make it more then jus rap
and Shift you're bone structure enough to turn your whole verse into caps


mhm.

Civil. 03-05-09 07:24 PM

Why even go 16 dude, cut ya verses down they wack as fuck
Cuz as soon as I saw 16 I was shorten of them would suck
^Ha, niiice. Son, dope shit
Final I MADE you dog, and ya NOT smart ya just bad, hoe
but your deffenetly bright...
...since ya spent ya career in my shadow
^this was ok



vs.


really though, alpha you're fat. i got you're girl in my rig
& me and her made clips with enough X's to even fit YOU too big
^this was aight
i'm nice with my hands man, so i'll make it more then jus rap
and Shift you're bone structure enough to turn your whole verse into caps
^meh.



ok, this battle was ok. Alpha you came consistent, your whole verse had
alot of attempts. Good wordplay, that fuckin sure/ten shorten line was fucking dope dog. Goood shit,

final, your verse had some attempts. And i can tell you still got ya cleverness
but in this battle. you had alot of statements man, you got to re word ya punches a bit more. Cuz they arent hitting. Your just saying this and that, not actually throwing something out. na sayen? be more direct


v. alpha

50Cal. 03-05-09 08:18 PM

ok final you had some good punches here but nothing real dope or oh ah type.alpha had some dope lines like the lost notes shit but alpha shit is steched as fuck taking from its effect.both fell off towards the end here.overall i have to give it to alpha though for having better punches and nicer concepts

bobericc_lyrics 03-05-09 08:35 PM

Im not an expert, but you've lost 2 a ton of heads as of recent
Analyst of those people would consist of anyone halfway decent
^^pretty good opener^^
Final I MADE you dog, and ya NOT smart ya just bad, hoe
but your deffenetly bright...
...since ya spent ya career in my shadow
^^ehh wasn't feeling it^^
I'm glad though, cuz wit ya bitch i dont force shit, I jus clap
So don't get mad at ME dude, harassment to land on my lap
^^lol good wp^^
Schoolin this herb, Im scared<-- but only just to give ya hope
Cuz the only kids that be FEARIN final..
.. are the dudes who lost their notes
^^good nameplay^^
Why even go 16 dude, cut ya verses down they wack as fuck
Cuz as soon as I saw 16 I was shorten of them would suck
^^lol crazy wp^^
& you aint champin this dude, need proof? I'll rock ya brain
Cuz we'll see Final in the champ match...
but thats only the topics name
^^cool closer^^

vs

he's tight to be around. i'm the type to try to know him
cus i get a rise outta alpha.. in the ranks when i KO him :]
^^lol cool opener^^
you're the retard type that thinks preperation is the best
but your bowels will be evacuating when my gun's Fire Drills your chest
^^ehh, wasn't feeling^^
homies gay, and you're girl? somebody should warn her..
his beds experienced more Man Coverage then shutdown corners
^^lol wow^^
really though, alpha you're fat. i got you're girl in my rig
& me and her made clips with enough X's to even fit YOU too big
^^mehh^^
im sick of this kid. i'ma let him get hit with the fire
cus Al's so weird, Mr. yankovic was forced to retire
^^mehh^^
i'm nice with my hands man, so i'll make it more then jus rap
and Shift you're bone structure enough to turn your whole verse into caps
^^straight hitter^^

it seemed to me that alpha stayed pretty consistent, boxed out his opponent on a lot of areas. I was feeling your ability with the wordplays. good to see some fresh shit floating around. anyways final's verse wasn't bad and he still hit a couple cool bars, alpha just brought it one step up..
v/Alpha

one way 03-06-09 07:33 PM

he's tight to be around. i'm the type to try to know him
cus i get a rise outta alpha.. in the ranks when i KO him :]
this was ok



Final I MADE you dog, and ya NOT smart ya just bad, hoe
but your deffenetly bright...
...since ya spent ya career in my shadow
this was also ok



alpha came more consistent but most of your wrodplay were basic puns, didn't flow both ways, wasn't very creative.....you have to take the wordplay to the next level now.

vote alpha

LPMNDCTE 03-07-09 07:34 PM

Im not an expert, but you've lost 2 a ton of heads as of recent
Analyst of those people would consist of anyone halfway decent

good solid opener

Final I MADE you dog, and ya NOT smart ya just bad, hoe
but your deffenetly bright...
...since ya spent ya career in my shadow

good wordplay, lol

I'm glad though, cuz wit ya bitch i dont force shit, I jus clap
So don't get mad at ME dude, harassment to land on my lap

barely descent

Schoolin this herb, Im scared<-- but only just to give ya hope
Cuz the only kids that be FEARIN final..
.. are the dudes who lost their notes

lol, this was cool

Why even go 16 dude, cut ya verses down they wack as fuck
Cuz as soon as I saw 16 I was shorten of them would suck

not harsh hitting at all

& you aint champin this dude, need proof? I'll rock ya brain
Cuz we'll see Final in the champ match...
but thats only the topics name

good closer

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he's tight to be around. i'm the type to try to know him
cus i get a rise outta alpha.. in the ranks when i KO him :]

kinda played opener


you're the retard type that thinks preperation is the best
but your bowels will be evacuating when my gun's Fire Drills your chest

barely descent

homies gay, and you're girl? somebody should warn her..
his beds experienced more Man Coverage then shutdown corners

lol, this was good

really though, alpha you're fat. i got you're girl in my rig
& me and her made clips with enough X's to even fit YOU too big

another good hit

im sick of this kid. i'ma let him get hit with the fire
cus Al's so weird, Mr. yankovic was forced to retire

nah, not feeling the Weird Al Yankovic wordplay

i'm nice with my hands man, so i'll make it more then jus rap
and Shift you're bone structure enough to turn your whole verse into caps

great closer

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This was a great battle. I got Alpha winning this one by one bar..

Vote - Alpha

Magic5 03-07-09 11:43 PM

Im not an expert, but you've lost 2 a ton of heads as of recent
Analyst of those people would consist of anyone halfway decent
I'm glad though, cuz wit ya bitch i dont force shit, I jus clap
So don't get mad at ME dude, harassment to land on my lap

vs.

you're the retard type that thinks preperation is the best
but your bowels will be evacuating when my gun's Fire Drills your chest
homies gay, and you're girl? somebody should warn her..
his beds experienced more Man Coverage then shutdown corners

I got it as a tie with bars.

I'm voting Final because I liked the rest of his verse better than the rest of Alphabetized verse. I'm not sure why the votes are so lopsided -- I thought this was a lot closer than the votes would indicate.

Civil. 03-09-09 08:03 AM

Alpha wins 4-1


Alpha 2-0
Final Goes to the jump 1-1


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