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Civil. 03-02-09 07:11 PM

LP 0-0 .vs C.A.L.I 0-0
 
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50Cal. 03-03-09 12:16 AM

ck................................................ ............................

LPMNDCTE 03-03-09 02:07 PM

checking................................

LPMNDCTE 03-03-09 02:08 PM

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another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party
& ya girls disease infected, that monsters all bout greed
got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach
ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming
& now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich
last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch
I'm original dude, left her gaped and hurtin more
i wisper sweet thoughts, you hit her with words she heard before


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50Cal. 03-03-09 11:41 PM

Still a 'flyweight'?...then you next to nothing
Whats with your name?...it probally spells bitch in Russian
Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping
And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion
So you act crazy hard but you a bitch in the flesh
A coward behind 'bars' no wonder you 'p.c' text
Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months
With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!!
This dudes a chump and a cum stained lame
Only 'L' he'll give out is the first letter in his dumb ass name

Civil. 03-04-09 06:20 PM

got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach
^lol, this wasn't bad. Thought it was funny, not really harsh though

& now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich
last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch
^cool concept, i think you fucked up on the wording though.



.vs



Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months
With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!!
Uh this is the only thing that wasnt wack...it was just blah. so i quoted it


weak battle. didnt like either of your verses. LP you got so much potential
man. I can see it every time i read ya shit. You got original concepts dog..
but you GOT to work on wording. and making it HIT.

v. lp

one way 03-05-09 07:48 PM

another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party
meh, it was ok you still lacking the solid wording
& ya girls disease infected, that monsters all bout greed
got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green
na
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach
ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming
not bad, not hard though
& now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich
last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch
na, poorly executed a generic concept
I'm original dude, left her gaped and hurtin more
i wisper sweet thoughts, you hit her with words she heard before
ok again but still lacking in harshness



Still a 'flyweight'?...then you next to nothing
Whats with your name?...it probally spells bitch in Russian
lol, this was ok, kinda basic and I saw so many name flips on him like that but still
Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping
And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion
I see the personal but it was still weak
So you act crazy hard but you a bitch in the flesh
A coward behind 'bars' no wonder you 'p.c' text
again concept is just kinda weak
Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months
With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!!
you could go somwhere here, it's worded bad though
This dudes a chump and a cum stained lame
Only 'L' he'll give out is the first letter in his dumb ass name
bad closer, pretty predictable


Ima give this one to Cali though has a problem with wording but so does lp

50Cal. 03-05-09 08:13 PM

1 to 1 now......................

bobericc_lyrics 03-05-09 08:53 PM

another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party
^^not bad^^
& ya girls disease infected, that monsters all bout greed
got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green
^^wasn't feeling^^
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach
ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming
^^lol, not bad^^
& now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich
last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch
^^wasn't feeling^^
I'm original dude, left her gaped and hurtin more
i wisper sweet thoughts, you hit her with words she heard before
^^could've been real harsh with better wording^^

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Still a 'flyweight'?...then you next to nothing
Whats with your name?...it probally spells bitch in Russian
^^ehh decent^^
Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping
And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion
^^pretty nice, could've had better wording^^
So you act crazy hard but you a bitch in the flesh
A coward behind 'bars' no wonder you 'p.c' text
^^wasn't feeling^^
Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months
With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!!
^^nahh^^
This dudes a chump and a cum stained lame
Only 'L' he'll give out is the first letter in his dumb ass name
^^nah^^

seems like lp getting better, a few of his bars we're hitting and his set ups actually had a couple of decent hits. stay on that page. as for cali, I think he could've dropped better, just by seeing the 1st and 2nd bar. you had the best punch but the consistency just dropped after that. just felt like you aint take this serious enough for my vote.
v/LP

Magic5 03-07-09 11:49 PM

another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach
ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming

vs.

Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping
And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion

Vote - LP

JTR 03-08-09 06:21 PM

another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach
ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming

vs.

Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping
And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion

v/LP

cali that one bar I quoted from you was fucking nice, the others were pretty weak, badly worded, or played. You gotta get more consistent yo. LP same with you, you gotta work on that consistency bruh

Civil. 03-09-09 08:07 AM

LP wins 4-1


LP 1-0

Cali loses and goes to the jump


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