LP 0-0 .vs C.A.L.I 0-0
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another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party & ya girls disease infected, that monsters all bout greed got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming & now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch I'm original dude, left her gaped and hurtin more i wisper sweet thoughts, you hit her with words she heard before ........ |
Still a 'flyweight'?...then you next to nothing
Whats with your name?...it probally spells bitch in Russian Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion So you act crazy hard but you a bitch in the flesh A coward behind 'bars' no wonder you 'p.c' text Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!! This dudes a chump and a cum stained lame Only 'L' he'll give out is the first letter in his dumb ass name |
got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green
as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach ^lol, this wasn't bad. Thought it was funny, not really harsh though & now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch ^cool concept, i think you fucked up on the wording though. .vs Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!! Uh this is the only thing that wasnt wack...it was just blah. so i quoted it weak battle. didnt like either of your verses. LP you got so much potential man. I can see it every time i read ya shit. You got original concepts dog.. but you GOT to work on wording. and making it HIT. v. lp |
another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party meh, it was ok you still lacking the solid wording & ya girls disease infected, that monsters all bout greed got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green na as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming not bad, not hard though & now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch na, poorly executed a generic concept I'm original dude, left her gaped and hurtin more i wisper sweet thoughts, you hit her with words she heard before ok again but still lacking in harshness Still a 'flyweight'?...then you next to nothing Whats with your name?...it probally spells bitch in Russian lol, this was ok, kinda basic and I saw so many name flips on him like that but still Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion I see the personal but it was still weak So you act crazy hard but you a bitch in the flesh A coward behind 'bars' no wonder you 'p.c' text again concept is just kinda weak Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!! you could go somwhere here, it's worded bad though This dudes a chump and a cum stained lame Only 'L' he'll give out is the first letter in his dumb ass name bad closer, pretty predictable Ima give this one to Cali though has a problem with wording but so does lp |
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another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party ^^not bad^^ & ya girls disease infected, that monsters all bout greed got money under her belt, but that aint the only type of green ^^wasn't feeling^^ as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming ^^lol, not bad^^ & now ya think ya Pimped Carlas, come on dude, your not that rich last time she went back to C.A.L.I., is cuz I dumped the bitch ^^wasn't feeling^^ I'm original dude, left her gaped and hurtin more i wisper sweet thoughts, you hit her with words she heard before ^^could've been real harsh with better wording^^ vs Still a 'flyweight'?...then you next to nothing Whats with your name?...it probally spells bitch in Russian ^^ehh decent^^ Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion ^^pretty nice, could've had better wording^^ So you act crazy hard but you a bitch in the flesh A coward behind 'bars' no wonder you 'p.c' text ^^wasn't feeling^^ Its funny because i ain't seen this kid in months With his 'diabetic' drink stand style...void of a punch!! ^^nahh^^ This dudes a chump and a cum stained lame Only 'L' he'll give out is the first letter in his dumb ass name ^^nah^^ seems like lp getting better, a few of his bars we're hitting and his set ups actually had a couple of decent hits. stay on that page. as for cali, I think he could've dropped better, just by seeing the 1st and 2nd bar. you had the best punch but the consistency just dropped after that. just felt like you aint take this serious enough for my vote. v/LP |
another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming vs. Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion Vote - LP |
another quitter from '03, so going threw you's a breeze
u've threw in so many towels we could start a toga party as hopeless as can be, my onslaughts too much to stomach ya career finally has bright lights..followed by Angels coming vs. Females never give you nothing but you praying an hoping And all you get is 'blue balls' like ya avatar moving in motion v/LP cali that one bar I quoted from you was fucking nice, the others were pretty weak, badly worded, or played. You gotta get more consistent yo. LP same with you, you gotta work on that consistency bruh |
LP wins 4-1
LP 1-0 Cali loses and goes to the jump |
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