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Civil. 03-09-09 08:39 AM

Gimmick Battle: KroNuZ 0-1 .vs Camarac 0-1 -needs feed-
 
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Line Limit- Min 10 lines, Max 20 lines
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Camarac 03-11-09 11:25 AM

check..........................

Camarac 03-11-09 11:26 AM

12 lines...text battle??..

Camarac 03-12-09 10:11 PM

His got trashy lyrics and all his concepts are played
and really..the only thing positive about him is aids
You wont win this battle so its clear youd better bounce
hell i'll even attack you with letters just to spell it out
and doesnt hurt to know that i'll crush this persons soul
he should keep his rhymes from this world, hip hop birth control
im as tight as hell, rhymes blow ya brain your mind will swell
your inclined to fail..they say only time will tell
So I might as well..let him know he'll never get the title belt
Even if he "drops once a month" with more lines to sell
i'll beat his ass "period" just to show that this guys a girl
So watch his record stay below 0 like it was minus twelve

Camarac 03-13-09 05:23 AM

no show.....wot happens now am I back in the tourney??

LPMNDCTE 03-13-09 09:42 PM

His got trashy lyrics and all his concepts are played
and really..the only thing positive about him is aids


this was basic, wordplay barely descent

You wont win this battle so its clear youd better bounce
hell i'll even attack you with letters just to spell it out

this was descent and a bit funny


and doesnt hurt to know that i'll crush this persons soul
he should keep his rhymes from this world, hip hop birth control

not feeling this line


im as tight as hell, rhymes blow ya brain your mind will swell
your inclined to fail..they say only time will tell

i dont feel like this was a direct hit


So I might as well..let him know he'll never get the title belt
Even if he "drops once a month" with more lines to sell

Nah

i'll beat his ass "period" just to show that this guys a girl
So watch his record stay below 0 like it was minus twelve

Nah

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Your verse was mediocre. You have room for improvement, but you did okay for this match. Work on better personals and your creativity level and you'll do fine in the league.

Final. 03-14-09 12:21 AM

Is this really even cam..?

Camarac 03-14-09 09:15 AM

lol nahhh its not he let me use his account for this tourney.......peazzee

fuck yuu 03-14-09 10:07 AM

Cam, your verse was basic and could use some better wordplay. No real direct personals either which grou good i mean i know he didn't show but you didnt know that he wouldn't show so why do that? Anyways work on those and mabye you could contend with some of us

Cola 03-14-09 06:04 PM

ok verus, enough to beat No Show, work on punches son

Civil. 03-16-09 10:12 AM

FU wins 1-1 and is moved back to the main arena

KroNuz loses recieving his second loss. And is eliminated.

You are the weakest link.

Gooodbye!


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