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one way 04-06-09 07:51 PM

One Way vs Coke Dealer
 


DO OR DIE
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Must Vote on the other three battles

Cola 04-06-09 09:01 PM

checkin in, g'luck One Way

one way 04-06-09 10:18 PM

check, you too.

Cola 04-06-09 10:18 PM

im goin ten, i'll drop tongiht if your down

Cola 04-06-09 10:30 PM

Wait a sec, you thinkin you dope? bro please
Only way you takin a higher place, cuz you picked the seeds
Ya deaf bitch? Hear the crowd sound, CD taking the crown
Cuz my direction's headed for One Way... yep, the next round
This dude in circles, i keep him heading in one way for this bout
Yet every time he's in a Turn He/Tourney, just gets knocked the fuck out
One Ways a gropie folks, all ova my nuts till he chokes
Cuz after this chump drinks, all his raw spits is Diet Coke
N sure after this battle, the punches left on ya face get ya some chicks
Only cuz my last bars, make em more recognizable as Aphil's bitch


a quick ten

g'luck man

one way 04-07-09 06:54 PM

You’ve kissed my ass all tourney long, and in return I kicked yours
I can’t stand putting in extra effort, good thing your no big chore
No one cares what you have to say, my feelings for this fool are hateful
The closest you come to calling the shots….... is agreeing to a facial
I perform at levels that are so beyond yours I’m choosing the rules
You write on levels……….so you will never be losing your tools
I’ll disable your writtens, I’m here to win this like I said I’d do
This battle started coke / one…..
Ye that sounded funny when I read it too.
Why are you battling for the money here with your horrible rants
The lottery has 1 in 500 000 odds….at least it’s more of a chance

Cola 04-07-09 07:01 PM

lol

vote away people

LPMNDCTE 04-07-09 09:17 PM

Wait a sec, you thinkin you dope? bro please
Only way you takin a higher place, cuz you picked the seeds

this was a descent opener

Ya deaf bitch? Hear the crowd sound, CD taking the crown
Cuz my direction's headed for One Way... yep, the next round


lol, this was cool


This dude in circles, i keep him heading in one way for this bout
Yet every time he's in a Turn He/Tourney, just gets knocked the fuck out

this was forced wordplay... barely descent


One Ways a gropie folks, all ova my nuts till he chokes
Cuz after this chump drinks, all his raw spits is Diet Coke


actually, this was a pretty well placed concept


N sure after this battle, the punches left on ya face get ya some chicks
Only cuz my last bars, make em more recognizable as Aphil's bitch

didnt like this closer


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You’ve kissed my ass all tourney long, and in return I kicked yours
I can’t stand putting in extra effort, good thing your no big chore

another descent opener


No one cares what you have to say, my feelings for this fool are hateful
The closest you come to calling the shots….... is agreeing to a facial

LOL..haha, this was great and creative


I perform at levels that are so beyond yours I’m choosing the rules
You write on levels……….so you will never be losing your tools

this was another good hit


I’ll disable your writtens, I’m here to win this like I said I’d do
This battle started coke / one…..
Ye that sounded funny when I read it too.

good hit

Why are you battling for the money here with your horrible rants
The lottery has 1 in 500 000 odds….at least it’s more of a chance

barely descent closer


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This was a good battle, but I feel that One Way came a bit harsher in this match.

Vote - One Way

Cola 04-08-09 01:15 PM

good stuff

0-1, bumpin for more votes

bobericc_lyrics 04-11-09 10:31 AM

Wait a sec, you thinkin you dope? bro please
Only way you takin a higher place, cuz you picked the seeds
^^decent, wording sucked^^
Ya deaf bitch? Hear the crowd sound, CD taking the crown
Cuz my direction's headed for One Way... yep, the next round
^^lol decent^^
This dude in circles, i keep him heading in one way for this bout
Yet every time he's in a Turn He/Tourney, just gets knocked the fuck out
^^kind of forced wp^^
One Ways a gropie folks, all ova my nuts till he chokes
Cuz after this chump drinks, all his raw spits is Diet Coke
^^lol could hit harder^^
N sure after this battle, the punches left on ya face get ya some chicks
Only cuz my last bars, make em more recognizable as Aphil's bitch
^^decent close^^

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You’ve kissed my ass all tourney long, and in return I kicked yours
I can’t stand putting in extra effort, good thing your no big chore
^^wasn't feeling^^
No one cares what you have to say, my feelings for this fool are hateful
The closest you come to calling the shots….... is agreeing to a facial
^^lol funny^^
I perform at levels that are so beyond yours I’m choosing the rules
You write on levels……….so you will never be losing your tools
^^wasn't feeling^^
I’ll disable your writtens, I’m here to win this like I said I’d do
This battle started coke / one…..
Ye that sounded funny when I read it too.
^^lol decent^^
Why are you battling for the money here with your horrible rants
The lottery has 1 in 500 000 odds….at least it’s more of a chance
^^lol straight close^^

pretty close matchup I could see it go either way. both had a lot of hit or miss punches, cokes verse was better in overall consistency but one had 2 of the funnier punches in this battle, some of cokes shit seemed statementy and one was using better setups.
v/one way

JTR 04-13-09 05:36 AM

Ill give an honest opinion here...

Wait a sec, you thinkin you dope? bro please
Only way you takin a higher place, cuz you picked the seeds
lol it's true he did
Ya deaf bitch? Hear the crowd sound, CD taking the crown
Cuz my direction's headed for One Way... yep, the next round
this was ok, the wordplay seems like it would be played though, too basic, doesnt hit hard, but has some appeal to it for some reason anyways, it just sounded cool
This dude in circles, i keep him heading in one way for this bout
Yet every time he's in a Turn He/Tourney, just gets knocked the fuck out
shouldnt have used the /////, this was forced
One Ways a gropie folks, all ova my nuts till he chokes
Cuz after this chump drinks, all his raw spits is Diet Coke
you could have used this so much harder, cool concept, shitty wording
N sure after this battle, the punches left on ya face get ya some chicks
Only cuz my last bars, make em more recognizable as Aphil's bitch
thought this was basic and very weak

vs.

You’ve kissed my ass all tourney long, and in return I kicked yours
I can’t stand putting in extra effort, good thing your no big chore
lol swagga, wasnt hard though, too basic and simple with the wording
No one cares what you have to say, my feelings for this fool are hateful
The closest you come to calling the shots….... is agreeing to a facial
lmfao I thought this was funny man
I perform at levels that are so beyond yours I’m choosing the rules
You write on levels……….so you will never be losing your tools
this was weak though
I’ll disable your writtens, I’m here to win this like I said I’d do
This battle started coke / one…..
Ye that sounded funny when I read it too.
lmfaooo this was executed perfectly
Why are you battling for the money here with your horrible rants
The lottery has 1 in 500 000 odds….at least it’s more of a chance
wack

oh man, this was really close here... I only liked one bar from Coke, and two from OneWay. Coke actually tried harder with personals though, but I still think oneway came harder, but it was actually close, coke shoulda worked on your wording some more man, you could have gotten this one

v/oneway

a nice battle guys

one way 04-13-09 05:52 PM

word, I move on thanks coke for participating fully.


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