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Tha Q. 11-02-09 06:13 PM

"Rules of life"...new Q track
 
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8301059


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www.myspace.com/thaqraps


Beat: Fbreezy Beats
Intro clip from the movie “300”
Hook: Q
Verses: Q

Concept: Inspirational song about staying steadfast in the midst of trials...slick hook on an uptempo beat.



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Speats 11-03-09 01:02 PM

You are good at choosing wack ass beats, But I prefer this track than the other I just comented, good track

M&rk 11-03-09 09:21 PM

the hook is dope because its explaining a simple concept from the bible in a creative enough way for people to know that you are talented and its not puttin too much of your corny opinions behind it. if you only did that all the time i would love your music, but when you "try" to be creative you are simply straying way from the meassege, which is just your ego getting the best of you thinking that you know better than God. all wordplay and metaphors must be directly related to the idea's of the bible or you are just another homo- no pun inteded
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you need to get your rules fixed as well because they controdict the bible. it says no where in the bible that opertunities don't knock twice, the concept you are messing up is that you can always make it, it is simply a decision in your mind to quit being a bitch, opertunities never knock twice, you can't say that and truely believe that God forgives but if you believe God forgives, opertunity knocks every second of every day no matter how far off you are from the way you should be living.
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if you aren't thinking of God and the bible in every concept and line, it will come back to bite you in the ass and you will sound like an idiot and leave a lot of chinks in your armer like JTR, haha

Tha Q. 11-03-09 09:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JP Morgan
the hook is dope because its explaining a simple concept from the bible in a creative enough way for people to know that you are talented and its not puttin too much of your corny opinions behind it. if you only did that all the time i would love your music, but when you "try" to be creative you are simply straying way from the meassege, which is just your ego getting the best of you thinking that you know better than God. all wordplay and metaphors must be directly related to the idea's of the bible or you are just another homo- no pun inteded
...
you need to get your rules fixed as well because they controdict the bible. it says no where in the bible that opertunities don't knock twice, the concept you are messing up is that you can always make it, it is simply a decision in your mind to quit being a bitch, opertunities never knock twice, you can't say that and truely believe that God forgives but if you believe God forgives, opertunity knocks every second of every day no matter how far off you are from the way you should be living.
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if you aren't thinking of God and the bible in every concept and line, it will come back to bite you in the ass and you will sound like an idiot and leave a lot of chinks in your armer like JTR, haha



Btw...this isn't technically "gospel" rap...it's inspirational with Theological overtones...

In any case, the rule that says "Opportunities don't knock twice" is a reference to battle strategies...particularly from the Art of War where it says "If you are in an advantageous position, you MUST make a move"...and the Book of 5 rings which talks about "Collapse" of an enemy (or situation)...basically stating that you never know if you'll have a second chance to achieve something that's presently in your reach...so don't COUNT ON IT...is en essence the message...STRIKE when the iron is hot.


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Dabatos 11-03-09 11:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Q.
Btw...this isn't technically "gospel" rap...it's inspirational with Theological overtones...

In any case, the rule that says "Opportunities don't knock twice" is a reference to battle strategies...particularly from the Art of War where it says "If you are in an advantageous position, you MUST make a move"...and the Book of 5 rings which talks about "Collapse" of an enemy (or situation)...basically stating that you never know if you'll have a second chance to achieve something that's presently in your reach...so don't COUNT ON IT...is en essence the message...STRIKE when the iron is hot.


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lol word...............

M&rk 11-03-09 11:57 PM

well do you want to promote the book art of war or the bible? i'mma try not to hate, but you're makin it hard for me, no homo, when you make up excuses and talk about controdictory things and try to back them up with bull shit i get bothered. take the messages from that book the art of war and relate them back to the bible or you're gonna suck your whole life and continue to be a hypocrite

M&rk 11-03-09 11:58 PM

or just say you are a hypocrite in the song, either way come REAL and stop trying to come clever

Tha Q. 11-03-09 11:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JP Morgan
well do you want to promote the book art of war or the bible? i'mma try not to hate, but you're makin it hard for me, no homo, when you make up excuses and talk about controdictory things and try to back them up with bull shit i get bothered. take the messages from that book the art of war and relate them back to the bible or you're gonna suck your whole life and continue to be a hypocrite




lol...dude...you are TOTALLY having an argument with yourself.




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Tha Q. 11-04-09 12:00 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JP Morgan
or just say you are a hypocrite in the song, either way come REAL and stop trying to come clever



actually...why don't you prove how "Seize the moment" contradicts anything in the bible...HYPOCRITE.

You have a problem with it...so YOU do the research.





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M&rk 11-04-09 06:41 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Q.
actually...why don't you prove how "Seize the moment" contradicts anything in the bible...HYPOCRITE.

You have a problem with it...so YOU do the research.





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seizing the moment doesn't go against the bible, saying you only get one chance to seize the moment and you have to strike when the iron is hot goes against the bible. everyone has every instant of every moment to capture and seize the moment, thats kinda the main point of Jesus isn't it, if not then we're reading different bibles
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the idea of Jesus and forgiveness gives even the worst sinner a chance to "capture the moment." the metaphor of capturing a moment from a christians stand point should be the oppertunity to come closer to God, right?

M&rk 11-04-09 06:44 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Q.
lol...dude...you are TOTALLY having an argument with yourself.




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maybe you should have more arguments with yourself before you spit your next verse and actually put realistic thought behind what you say
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i mean if i'm still talking to a homo who believes in the bible and isn't a walking controdiction stop me.


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