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T lite 01-18-03 05:58 PM

This is just a song i wrote, tell me what ya think!!
 
i know it aint a rap song, but let me know what ya think!!


“In The End”


When I start to think about you
All I seem to think about is pain
the way you're makin me feel
can’t be cured by a pill
All this drama that ya put me through
all these hard times will come back to you

in the end you'll get what you deserve,
in the end i won't be the only one that’s hurt
in the end you'll finally feel what I feel
then you'll get to see
this ain't what love should be

When I look back on all the fun we had
all the good times are outshadowed by the bad
When will you finally learn, when will you finally see
when all this hurt comes back to you it'll be twice as bad as me

in the end you'll get what you deserve,
in the end i won't be the only one that's hurt
in the end you'll finally feel what I feel
then you'll get to see
this ain't what love should be

Why should i take all this hurt
Why should i take all this pain
there's no reason for me to stay
so what am i doin here today
I'm gone
I'm leavin you today
no reasons for me to stay
that's why i'm writing you this song
just to say i'm gone

in the end you'll get what you deserve,
in the end i won't be the only one that's hurt
in the end you'll finally feel what I feel
then you'll get to see
this ain't what love should be

LyL-e-InC 01-19-03 04:04 AM

...
 
it was g0od...i was feelin it...

Ghetto_Samurai 01-19-03 10:23 AM

It was aight as far as i'm concerned a little simplistic but u know if dat's da tip u wanted it to be on u workin it kid ~1~


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