rap im workin on
 

Your punch lines are irrelevant// you aint even my equivalent// all that trash u talkin// aint gonna get u nothin but hurt// and I wont feel no sympathy when u six feet deep in the dirt// I tried to warn ya but u neva took it to heart// messin wit my crew would leave ya seein nothin but dark// ya see pac kept speaking the real// even on a bad day his shit was ill// he kept it comin til his very last breathe// his rhymes stayed alive even after his death// he still continues to inspire young cats// that gotta make a livin slangin rocks and packin gats// we need more mc’s that can bring it like him// stand up for what they believe and neva give in// be ready to fight if its for the right cause// put out some classics like “illmatic” and nas// ya see I gotta give credit when credit is due// yall keep spittin and you’ll get your props too//

yo how u talk bout a person den pac all u gotta do is stick to da topic dawg then u went to nas dat ain't a good thing it's like u got lyrical A.D.D.
U can only get better ~1~

yea i know, but i went ahead and posted it. thats y i said i was workin on it.

there was no topic on this kid
 

you jus were blurt'n lines becuz they rhymed....lost me a couple of times...floe was descent...
rat'n....6/10

cuz you went of subject....or whatever

Just tell the truth its sucked ass