tell me if this makes since to yall!
 

this is somethin i wrote a hella long time ago and i came across it in one of my old books...tell me what you think!


yall need to do away with ya ignorence/
tyrin to come at this from a distance and from every direction/
but i got that perifial perspective to spot ya as soon as you step into my sections/
you seem to just be obseesin over the thought that i got what you lack/
for this i give you no slack/
tight with my facts that ill react quik to any of your attacks/
you know all you got is false aclaims/
takin flight at the sight of war/
fuck with me and im leavin ya brain sore/
decorate it in the finest flowin matter of decor/
iv already climbed the ladder leadin to the door at the highest of peaks/
ive weathered all your storms,none of which at the force to defete/
so you need to take all ya undeveloped senses back to class and have a seat/
learn somethin new and then come back and compete


aight....im not claimin this shit is hot or nothin i just wanna see what all you think of some of my hella older shit! holla with some feedback....and uhhhh......dont mind the fuckin noodle rap aight, i was fuckin around late night eatin top ramen, i wasnt serious with that shit!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31386
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31411

i think you should combine this sorta style with the other one you use man you know like old skool meets new skool

i think it could work for you


peace

Yo what up man... is been a while huh...
Yo what happend to the site man? been trying to log on for a month now...

Yeah it was pretty descent...
"so you need to take all ya undeveloped senses back to class and have a seat/
learn somethin new and then come back and compete"
I felt these last two lines the most...
the style here is different from others you wrote, and it's aight...
Seeing your others I could say you've evolved your style pretty good man.... peace...

shit yo... this place has been down for ages.... omg!

i can finally see all my old post! FUCK YEA

and its nice to see a friendly name... sup alias?