brains nameless name!!
 

shiftin portrayed portraits of faces/
the unperfect picture left to be painted/
a devastated trail of minds ive recreated is yet to be debated/
a previously underated emcee tragically belated with blasphemy/
concieled by a mask of shadows/
am i speakin facts or fictionally puttin acts and shows/
ask and the answer you shall recieve/
sent peacefully but in an instant after opening,anger released/
leaving properties of mass deseaste/
awkwardly seated,there is no peace/
fore-fathers that proceeded to state,"equality will never be reached by these emcees"/
so seasons greetings id never decree,feelin completely at ease with these millamee's/
but are you feeling me/
if not, you will be guarenteed, no need to say please/
your death feaseable easily and id gladly squeeze/
with no second thoughts my subliminal plots dont tease/
demented mischieviously to the point that i ought to be committed/
but the committee just cant seem to catch me/
wit a straight jacket id lace up ya whole family/
now theres a sight for sore eyes to peep


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^^ tight very visual thoughts...at da begining n middle this piece has thought provoking content...tight, i like........:D peace

thanx playa! same for ya piece too dawg...."very thought provokin" ill be lookin out for ya next post yo...

keep the replies comin ^^^^^^^

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SICKNESS!!!!!!!!!
 

tight
that shit was tighter than a virgin's ass!!!!!!!

alright man, it seems here you dressed this up with TOO much vocab and imagery throughout this. dont sacrifice making sense for the sake of using as many big words as possible, and i couldnt cathc the rhythm of this either. pick a topic, a direction and push your thoughts that way.

you got potential.