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jus another spit
i'll hit ya wit lethal spits, my lips move at a bruce lee speed...//
pen so sharp i'm known to make a loose leaf bleed....// bruise these geeks, cuz i'm like nelly f. i'll turn off ya lights, turn off ya lights...// when i punch you...cuz i'm always urg'n a fight, when i'm lurk'n at night....// i'm slab stack'n when my gats blast'n, man i love these hollow tips...// think my tec was a hoodrat the way it swallows clips...// an me writ'n qoutes is like fright'n jolts from light'n bolts...// decypha codes, flipp'n wigs, ripp'n kids, i'm stuck at a hyper mode...// on overdrive, i'm flow'n like, the mississpi river...// end'n battles wit the qwik spits i deliver...// stick clips in an pull triggers, i slaughter for fun...// the father of guns, ya'll jus my daughters an sons....// call me a fuck'n renegade wit heat...// energy increases when the gatorade is seeped...// invade ya streets, leave ya blazed like weed, full of hate an greed...// catch me swing'n the gat, an cock'n clips....// i'm bring'n the bats, wit the glock at hip....// i'm dropp'n kids flat to the ground...// get the fuck out my face, and turn back around...// let me know what y'all think bout that...am i still a lil rusty...? |
self is god. I am a hurrb. I am sorry for posting in this thread.
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Eyo this was some ill wordplay, this kinda stuff that make commercial raps, keep doing ya thing dawg
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I liked your flow and your wordplay. Keep up the work yo.
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I think as a senior emcee and not a newbie rookie like these peeps i think it was kinda off in ya multies but u made up for it with that scheme all i'm gonna say is just work on ya structure too cuz it had no real meaning which makes ya flows borin.....
Ucan oly get better.... |
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