the outkast
 

My first time at trying to rap, found this site and threw this together in like 5mins, see what u think :)

they all be callin me an outkast
i just want these times to go by fast
so this is how they want their 15 of fame
to stand up and put down my respected name
they bin calling me nothing but a queer
and no-ones belived me for well over a year
i stand alone knowing it aint true
but i cant prove it im stuck like glue
they all lie and make me out as a joke
my hostile actions is what they provoke
they all be on the wrong side
but when along comes a change of tide
all these people they be coming back
they know they cant just put me on the rack
its time for them to feel my might
but they wont put up their fists and fight
they wont gimme a chance to prove myself
they just wanna put me on the shelf
they all be laughin an then they point
but i just stand an lift up my joint
take one long hit
and put up with their shit

its was aight for just throwing it together next time try to make it longer also try and use larger word? shyt was aight though peep my shyt if u get a chance

.Brandy.
 

No offense kid, but your name should be Ray J. 'Cuz you sound more like you're singin' tune then throwin' down a verse. Keep workin'.