"o so lonely" DO NOT SLEEP DAMNIT!!!
 

reaching out with hands of such fraility
grasping thin air, these images melting
sheltered from every clouds silver lining
i know the best things are out there.....
yet doubts and dispair are all that find me
the lighting at the end of this tunnel dims till bareley seen
in the midst of darkness,on my own i sit and think
thoughts pondered slowly as i wander to the brink
my somber nature meeting only pens,pads and ink
so sad wishing i could grip and grab anothers hand and leave
damn..my ship lags,dragging behind this insular life of mine
in this vast sea im so alone,but i continue to strive
still trying to find sight in being socially blind
but over time,vocals in my lonely mind thrive
becoming locals on the inside till the day i die
their coniving words echoed and survived
convincing me to contrive a merky essence
conversating,taking turns weve grown together
through adolesence,confiding in eachothers presence
although learning nothing new from answering my own questions
teaching the same re-worded lessons ina manner so depressin'
left without a precher yet in dire need of makin a confession....
till the end from the beginning,entirely alone is what im guessin

ummmm this sounded like a poem nothing really to talk about honestly didnt catch my eye 1

never ceasing to amaze me!

hmm well i was juss sayin

Re: "o so lonely" DO NOT SLEEP DAMNIT!!!
 

yea i agree wit trill. it just doesnt really go anywhere. i aint hatin. i tried to read it but i got bored after the first 2 lines. i dunno maybe its me.

its so sad when the minds wander so astray, and become blind to a deeper meaning!! HERBS!!!!!!!!


oh yea and LMAO!!!

that shit was fire like micheal jackson at pepsi commercials...you dunny i always liked the way you flow...big up on this rhyme...fuckin ignorant people aint gettin the message...fuck it....one


No wonder they clock (who?) them cops i feel like a wrist cuz i'm constantly under they watch...Narcicyst

finally a legit repy... its a miracle! :eek:

lol

I wasnt really feeling his piece.....im not into the poetry shit unless it has a rap flow to it.......but i can relate to the topic...keep droppen....

hmmm......

poetry is dope!

Yes
 

poetry is dope.....what part of SC do you stay....we got a dope poetry SLam here in CHARLESTON

i reside in the sc over in cali! lol

i should change that, fools always thinkin im talkin about south carolina...lol

nice...
 

poetry was tight here, not a rap flow, but it's still straight. Do you spit flows or stick to poetry? I'd like to here what you got on tha other side of tha feild. keep spittin' dawg, you'd get more props on this in tha poetry forum, for ya info....
peace

I'm OuTtIe

me and cise are droppin an audio tomarrow hopefully! its gonna be pretty dope ,well if i dont spit like a whore! so to answer your question, i play both sides of the field, the poetry side and the "Farside"! thanx for the tip, i just wanted to see what would happen if i posted in here!

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