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yo i clap souls like hand hard and quick/den start throw up money ery time i'm sick/ to be me is somethin quit unigue/da kinda nigga who'd rather rap a rhyme then ta speak/and like an ethiopian yo plight looks bleak/cause when i'm pissed i bring da heat/settin off lyrical napalms while yo shit sound like poetry/soft and weak/ i'm da kinda nigga dat roll deep in da streets/ i don't play games/ quit school cause of recess/if you make it out a lyrical fight alive dats much respect/my mouf spits mad bullets just call it a tech/

yo mad you need a lot of work as far as concept, imagery, metaphors, multies, man just elevate and fast before someone sees this