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SkItZO {\/.S} DuEsHy
No d/r
nO krew No hate votes 3 ta KO 5 ta Win Votes Gotta B Xplained Since DUESHY dunt kno where ta post imma put it where itz possed ta be.......... DUESHY'S VERSE: Stand back//its important you understand that// me and my crewfrom an unforbidden galaxy//we gonna beat you so bad ima be you majesty// Ill leave you more merciless than driving on all flats// investigatoral reports, About my GAT FORCE/leavin you crushed and needy callin s-s-s-ssupport// I gut you wit a knife, and rip ya heart from ya flesh// you transported for forensic identification with bullet wounds in ya chest// you filled wit so many holes you look like you MESH//(material clothing) Ya face left so fuked up docterz pass out at your sight// ya parents cant press charges cause nobody would “read them their rights”// I’ll Pack dynamite in ya In ya casket and blow up more than half of it// I laugh at your funeral while checkin your mom out in black tightz// I got mad game so she be in my bed no later than tonight// shes as easy as silly putty// my bitch an’ I been wantin a threesome, she can be my buddy/../.. <Thas a ~double~ play> .No escape//you raped//you dribble tha ball on my court, now ya hatin ya fate// You rap like you crack,but im platinum black// I smack you off balance like a surprise attack//you hopeless, in a fight to the death you wouldn’t cap back// //fuk, ima put you to sleep like a dog, an you gonna hit the sack// |
imma drop ma verse lata...................
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iight, ma fault it took so long ta post ma verse, i been handlin biznuss. Newayz, herez ma verse..........
yo yo yo yo u couldnt b "HOT " if u lived on a tropical coast,\\1// u still a lyrikal minor, u aint even got 21 posts//\\2// have ur bitch sweatin badly wen u c diz specific~notion\\3// talkin bout ur girl, she got mo crabz den da Pacific~Ocean//\\4// U lost diz shit, u goin hard 4 no reason,\\5// probably took all year 2 come ur verse like a basketball season//\\6// peoplz gonna c diz battle, n dey gonna kno who da best((ME!))\\7// c'n diz is like Alien cuz ur heart gonna bust through her chest//\\8// i should get arrested, diz murder'z ill le~gal\\9// cant find ur penis, cuz u a fat bastard like Beanie Sie~gal\\10// U a bum nigga, i c u in da streets wavin ya can~yo\\11// not a opera n i aint Tony, but i have u screamin SOPRA~NO//\\12// yo u stink nigga, like a plate full of sushi\\13// must have been hi wen u came up wif da name DUESHY//\\14// yo freal, u must have been smokin dat crack~yo\\15// u couldnt spit if u waz chewin 12 packs of tabacco\\16// u a CATBURGLER, u kno u stealin dem flowz\\17// have commitin suicide like Mikihi Pfier in "O"\\18// yo battlin me man, u kno datz a really big risk\\19// waitin 4 a cum shot wif ur tounge stuck out like KISS\\20// Wen u dissappear not even by ur mom u'll b missed\\21// u like a tranquilizer, cuz u have me snorin in boredom//\\22// made diz da 23rd line cuz i dunk on ur head like Mike Jordan\\23// u beat so many dick u called da handy~man,//\\24// if i sed ur name in a mirror 3 timez would u sell me some "CANDYMAN"((candy, man))\\25// ur talent iz low like da murder rate in da burbs\\26// im NY'S FINEST Rapper, u NY's FINEST herb!\\27// even if u waz on stilts nigga, u couldnt c me\\28// i kno u cum((come)) hard, cuz u jerk off aggressively!((check hiz profile))\\29// |
uppin 4 votes
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yo y everybody frontin on da votes?!?!? uppin
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my vote goes to skitso nicca that flow was hot man
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Vote: Skitzo
Dueshy had some 'ok' stuff, but the flow sometimes was messed up cuz of an extra line or a line was too short. some harder punches coulda made up for that, but you didn't have too many, if any. Skitzo took this shit in the first bar: "u couldnt b "HOT " if u lived on a tropical coast,\\1// u still a lyrikal minor, u aint even got 21 posts//\\2//" nice set up with a personal. You had a couple of good personals, I like that ish...... Stay up ya'll |
yo i cant count ur vote Liam, u aint xplain dat shit so 1-0, uppin
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skitzo i like that... some nice punches... other cous was just garbage...
im kinda upset that you wasted all those punchlines on the kid... you coulda used half of that... haha... good shit... my vote SKitzo p.s ahhh well whenever i battle you it'll just be easier for me... imma check for recyling |
2-0 uppin 4 KO
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yo, ,my votes for skitzo.... that shit was hype... some sick similies in it.. and you ripped him apart with your punches...
"talkin bout ur girl, she got mo crabz den da Pacific~Ocean"----> that shit was ill... "have commitin suicide like Mikihi Pfier in "O"\\18// yo battlin me man, u kno datz a really big risk\\19// waitin 4 a cum shot wif ur tounge stuck out like KISS\\"-----> Those lines were fuckin' serious... good spit yo.. |
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vote = skitzo
this battle was very average...the first dude was awful, no wordplay, no punchlines, no personals no mets......shit was just weak. not trying to hate, just being real with you dawg. you got a lot of elevating to do. start with trying to incorporate multis into your shit, then work your way onto putting punches in...... skitzo...your shit wasn't awful but was still far from great. you had punches which was a good start and i found your verse rhymed and flowed a bit better. punches is what wins battles. You had some played out unoriginal shit like your first few bars for example.....you did get better and had few lines with some more wit further into your verse. vote = skitzo.....this dude actually had punches |
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