im back heres some stuff
 

I feel flows that take control of my body as a whole
I pay tolls that leave me empty with no soul
Threes no goal I refuse to believe
That I cant achieve with one or two of the tricks from up my sleeve
I weave in out of mind states and situations
Recreating situations into rap facilitation
So here’s my creation my words rocked and lifted
I don’t care if people say that “You’re white you cant be gifted”
My shits un scripted because If told folks in advance
The words they would read would leave shit split in their pants
My life’s been full of “cants” “your no good” “there’s” no chance”
but every test that I’ve had I made my way out and passed
Harassed every mother fucker that said it couldn’t be done
Fought in every gun battle with my words and I won
Chose not to run but to stand and take abuse
I told them to hang me ill even tie the noose
With no hands id cut loose and bring abuse to their psyche
I don’t give a fuck I could care less if you like me
But try just to despite me ignite my anger come fight me
you’ll think twice when my words are down your throat choking you tightly
Unlike lightening I strike in the same place
Till I see that dumb look of a shocked kid on your face
that’s when I know I erased any thoughts that you had
Of “I’m just another kid from the burbs with a mom and a dad”
Or “white rap is just a fad “ “you eminem wanna be”
Fuck that it does feel empty without me
And em’s got his own deal he’s doin it proudly
I just want my own shit to clear up your mind from being cloudy
And not quiet but loudly ill stand on my soap box
Preaching my own shit like I was Aesop or C. Ox
Fuck rocking socks bring on the school of hard knocks
Ill tell you why bumpin mainstream will just ware out your shocks
Watch clocks when they rhyme because they just moves faster
I stop time with words changing the phases of matter
As a matter of fact tracks slack when I’m jacked
It reacts back and leaves me in a state of attack
Like a gun rack I keep my words within reach
in case there’s an ignorant mother fucker in need of a lesson , ill teach
And preach my sermon with passion like Eric sermen
Then dangle my dongle in your face like Pee wee Herman
And leave you squrimin reactions have left you with to much action
I don’t care if you follow me, it’s a culture not a faction
Traction only get you so far before you slip and you fall
Through the cracks and have your crack cracked open in a bathroom stall
And no one heard you call at all or they did and didn’t choose care
Because this isn’t the game of life, this is life so be aware
That a blank stare could be the difference between truth or dare
Or lets rip this mic like we the same and nobody cares




ive got this on audio too
peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31692

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=31682


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My words flex and swell, gell and absorb heat from hell, repeat then retell at the speed of seamen cells

That was just pure illness. I was feeling every aspect of it except at one point you seemed to have lost the mind frame you were once in while writing this. All the rest was near flawless though. This coupling of lines really got me and I was like... Dude, you're getting a 10 or some shit. good drop.

The words they would read would leave shit split in their pants
My life’s been full of “cants” “your no good” “there’s” no chance”

^those 2

pz

domain you have always been there man
thanks for the props
im here till the end

upin

Of “I’m just another kid from the burbs with a mom and a dad”
Or “white rap is just a fad “ “you eminem wanna be”
Fuck that it does feel empty without me

So true every white rappers just compared to eminem now, just that damn good at his game, same with u, impressive stuff :)

^agreed, I forgot to mention that. lol... oops, b/c I'm white too and it's like living in a shadow of Eminem's when you just do it for fun cuz I know I probably won't pursue a career in it. I don't think I'm THAT good.

Yea, I try to be here for the folks that are cool with me. I appreciate you being there too Muse... lol. I feel like I'm on a talk show or something.

pz

thanks for the props yo
white rappers need to just show their own thing so teh eminem deal wont work anymore
eventually there will be as many white rappers as balck.
well i dont know about that
but color shouldnt mean shit
peace