SLAVES(our people)
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1943#post301943


I did this on another site...this weak site has came bacc..lol..so i gotta come bacc and break it down 4 sum herbs..

If is was up to me,white would be a color of evil//
i aint even full blacc but i still feel the pain of what they do to my people//
slavery in cotton fields kiss mastas ass for 437 years//
mulitiply that by infinity and u have a ocean of blacc tears//
and i havent even heard 1 white person say slaverys bad,in which they would regret//
but its a bitch cause it was in the 60's we became equal and we got some fuccin respect//
i eject nothing on the whips chains that we were slaves like animals//
and they wonder why we all hate and they question why we akt like canibals//
mandible claws and solitary confindment for years and hot sunfill days//
3rd degree burns,burned 1nce more from the sunrays//
we strong mentaly so we went out the next day//
without some break,a lunch and then no pay//
the worst was how the owners would rape our daughters//
spit in their faces and viginty was lost and vaginal areas were slaughtered//
and its like a lost part in history like white man cant make a mistake//
but fucc that,our culture only has one month to celibrate//
then bacc to 11 months of white people to yell in our face//
tell us and remind us that sum how we nuthyn//
but got damn it i will be damned if we are nuthyn//
nigga we are sumthin,in the eyes of angels and ancestors that have suffered//
everyday is my holiday to them and i reflect,mother fucker//

Its Tight...but i think its a little simple..It needz sum vokab dawg

^ Word, I agree. It need some touching up. Has potential to be an excellent piece, but the flow is inconsistant, and vocabualry needs to be expanded for a topic like this. Keep them coming. Pz!