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SLAVES(our people)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1943#post301943
I did this on another site...this weak site has came bacc..lol..so i gotta come bacc and break it down 4 sum herbs.. If is was up to me,white would be a color of evil// i aint even full blacc but i still feel the pain of what they do to my people// slavery in cotton fields kiss mastas ass for 437 years// mulitiply that by infinity and u have a ocean of blacc tears// and i havent even heard 1 white person say slaverys bad,in which they would regret// but its a bitch cause it was in the 60's we became equal and we got some fuccin respect// i eject nothing on the whips chains that we were slaves like animals// and they wonder why we all hate and they question why we akt like canibals// mandible claws and solitary confindment for years and hot sunfill days// 3rd degree burns,burned 1nce more from the sunrays// we strong mentaly so we went out the next day// without some break,a lunch and then no pay// the worst was how the owners would rape our daughters// spit in their faces and viginty was lost and vaginal areas were slaughtered// and its like a lost part in history like white man cant make a mistake// but fucc that,our culture only has one month to celibrate// then bacc to 11 months of white people to yell in our face// tell us and remind us that sum how we nuthyn// but got damn it i will be damned if we are nuthyn// nigga we are sumthin,in the eyes of angels and ancestors that have suffered// everyday is my holiday to them and i reflect,mother fucker// |
Its Tight...but i think its a little simple..It needz sum vokab dawg
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^ Word, I agree. It need some touching up. Has potential to be an excellent piece, but the flow is inconsistant, and vocabualry needs to be expanded for a topic like this. Keep them coming. Pz!
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