beatle juice v.s Firesquadgangsta
 

heres the rules
no dick rdying
no bittin
10 bar max
verse due 5pm tommrow
any one spit first
and no crying if you lose

HERES MA VERSE
 

i'm goin post my like after

i'm goin go easy on you since you's a newbie
i can be realy hard in battles i use to be the best on the site tell it broke down

kid my rhymes dig-graves-when im insane-to leave ur mind-frame-Inflamed,//1
u cant regain ur strength-i'll spit 5 bars to ur 10- and still win-tha voters dont care bout ur verses "length",//2
i shackle backs wit rapid-attacks to leave ur "digestive-tract" less "intact"- and worse than "ex-lax" you get that,//3
Yo-battlin me? u gonna need an "extra-brain" to beat-this- cause ur thesis-aint "completed" ~ya gettin "surgery"-so in tha end it's "handicapped"~Me ~VS~ U wit a "fetis",//4
i can't stop it, making you face defeat while you drouwn in your vomitt got it,//5
it's like goin "shopping"-cause it lets me go on a "spree"-of-hits-this kids left "unconscious",//6
your flow i can beat it with the weakest spits, and still weaken it,//7
just cause they "aint voting" for U~dont mean they "sleepin-it",//8

EVERYBODY LOOK AT THIS ENDING:
U GOT A GAT?( CAUSE HE'S GANGSTER) WHAT STREETS U REPPIN,//9
SINCE WHEN DOES SESAME STREET NEED PROTECTION,//10

reply
 

what up? u missing a couple of screws? 2 fuckin bad dog, now ah know your gonna lose! Ahl allwayz b a player , racist h8r were as youll allways eat your mum out an save sum for l8r. U spit like your actually worth a bit but when ah step up 2 the mic ah make u sound like shit. When u catch my stare u enter a nightmare + u sound like a poof dog and thats me being fare!!!

uppin

uppin for votes i guess keenan is that ganaster guy uppin for juice
to bad i can't vote cause i'm his next door neighbor

yo black shadow thanks ma computer was broken

yo where's your verse you had so long to do it

i'm goin give you till tommrow if not done this battle is K.o not even a no show k.o

vote= juice, everything was better better flow better word play better delivery better punches,

keenan i know your new but you need to work on you punches and word play if your going to be going up against guys like this but you get respect for not ducking him